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Mariacheat-Brony
Hey there, Mariacheat-Brony here, Belgian Brony writer. Favorite Ponies : Vinyl Scratch & Applejack \OCTASCRATCH FOR THE WIN/
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Finally got enough actual pony content to post this I see :P
Still don't really know why no OC EQG characters is a rule if their is zero canon characters because their still colourful not ponies
Nice title btw.
Heh, I was wondering which image you would use as this story's cover, and you picked out a very good one.
Say... now that you were finally able to upload this chapter, don't you want to correct their names at this point?
5459507
Good Point.... Should be done now...
5458899 use search with image on google
5459594 [nsfw link would be here if I was allowed]
I tested my advice and found that it didn't work so I manually found it lol
5459597 5459600
Google Image search must have a hard a time with cropped image.....
Haaaa, the only really fault in that image is that it's not a picture of Tavi that Vinyl's holding.... (not really a fault still)
5459617 I just went on the tumblr :P
part of me wonders if octavia well get her nipple(s) peirced within the timeline of the story?
The extra credits is worth reading the story it is related to.
I wholly agree with this one 5459507
Especially here:
That's definitely Viola's line.
There were a few other grammatical discrepancies, Mariacheat.
If you'd like, I could give this thing a read-through and suggested corrections.
AIP§
5462081 Actually I was referring to how their names were their Pony counterparts before Mariacheat corrected that after I posted my previous comment:
Fiddlesticks = Fiona
Symphony = Viola
They were probably like that because as Mariacheat stated, he tried to post this up before, but even with changing their GTVS names to their Pony names, the Moderators didn't allow it because there wasn't enough "MLP content."
So with the additional of the 2nd Extra Credit featuring Vinyl Scratch and Octavia (more well-known characters), this chapter was allowed to published as well.
But anyway, nice job on spotting that mistake in dialogue.
5461864 It wsa on pg 7 of her nsfw one
5462643
Oh! That's what you meant. Got it.
And thanks. Although considering I'm editing for our dearest author, it's the kind of stuff I'd better spot.
AIP§
Shouldn't that 'an' be 'a'?
I like how Tavi has been doing 'research' to be somewhat prepared for situations like this.
It's nice to see a side story like this that, despite the fact that it is NSFW, is still enjoyable to read because it focuses more on the characters then the actions, like how Octavia's super worried and needs to keep remindind herself what to do next.
(BTW, if my reasoning above doesn't make any sense, it's because I'm awful at putting thoughts into written words.)
All in all, I think this was a fun side chapter to read.
-BiomasterM2
well done 10/10
awesome
...and then...?
5594049 they fucked
5594534
No kidding. Not gonna lie, was kinda hoping that part would be included.
5595079
Thing is, when I was getting to that part, I kept on getting to relatively too hard stuff for my tastes. Since I couldn't get a satisfactory actual sex scene, I focused on the teasing part and on the start of foreplay... for the rest, I might get down to writing it another time, but for the moment I leave all that part to your...
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Fair enough, dude. I've seen enough of your work to know that you know what you're doing.
Too short lol. That cliffhanger was literally a cocktease
Fucking Tease!