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I don't suppose you could make a sequel where he runs afoul of Methdancer, could you?

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Actually, this is kinda a prequel to one of my other stories, Shining Armor's One Shot Toy. I hadn't meant for it to tie in, but as I wrote, it just happened.

Wtf did I just read?

:rainbowhuh:... this story is rated for capture the flag mode?

Well I certainly enjoyed the content of this story.

The way Shining was saying it was going to be ok each time and then went with it being not like it was nothing, bothered me a little. Eh fetishes are weird that way. I mean you either care or you don't there is no flopping back and forth. Plus I never have licked deceitful preds anyway.

okay, that was hot

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He wasn't really deceitful (except for the first part with Soarin). It was just a matter of things just not going right, which again ties in with Shining Armor's One Shot Toy.

4727635 First I would like to think you for replying. It's very rare for the author to actually talk to me.

Like I said either you care or you don't. The way he flops back and forth doesn't fit with any real personality. I don't see how that particular aspect ties into One Shot toy. Shure Twilight cast the wrong spell, but no one changed there view point (besides for the very obvious mind rapping).

It's unfortunate. That one little detail made Shining not only unbelievable to me, but actually made me dislike him. If his concern had lasted longer or he never cared in the first place, it would of been better for me. Odd isn't it?

Our fetishes can be oddly specific, and I unfortunately am a minority within a minority. I mean no disrespect and realize that you write to please yourself first, and if you have actually read this far I would like to thank you again.

Wonderful. There really is a lack of decent cockvore stories, or cockvore stories at all, on this site.

I enjoyed this story way too much :heart::heart::heart: ESPECIALLY the part with Braeburn.

Favorited and liked, this is one of the best cockvore stories I've read. I noticed Shining's shifty attitude, a bit odd, but I think the only one he is certainly guilty for is Spitfire, he didn't keep his promise at all:twilightangry2:. I don't really mind though, any predator will usually lose his capacity to truly care at some point. Anyway, voretastic story:pinkiehappy:. Correction-just liked, I can get a hold of this story without it. Changed, again, like changed to dislike (since as far as I know I can't remove a like), the inconsistency of Shining Armor is a bit to much for me sorry... Still a very good vore story, and very good at utilizing the cockvore angle.

Pinkie Pie throws up after the whole 'baked bads' thing, just so you know. There's even a bucket next to her bed, so it was clearly expected by the nurse and not just 'Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie'.

Considering Shining just murdered three ponies... might want to add the Dark tag to this...

Very well-written though.

What is this I don't even.

any chance to do more Stories like this?

this is hilariously weird.....

I was prepared for the fetishes.

I was not prepared for the deaths.

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CTF (Gaming) = Capture The Flag
CTF (Porn) = Cock TransFormation

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...how is this relevant?

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A loud rumble from Spitfire's rounded stomach punctuated what Shining Armor was saying, the mare staring at the white stallion in horror, “I... no, I can save him I could-”

“Could what? Puke him up? Or did you forget that horses can't throw up? Not that it's going to matter in a few minutes.”

I was running on the assumption that people reading the comments for a story had actually read the story when I posted my original comment.

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I did read the story. I also read the entire comments section after reading the story. It's just hard to understand a comment without context.
You should have put that quote in the original comment.

There's simply isn't enough cockvore out there.

Although well-written for what it is, you get a down-vote from me. This story needs a dark tag. It isn't optional. I like my sexy-times without death involved, and the story description did not indicate that there would be any.

6416930 I know right, i'd prefer the... victims to be alive and well, NOT METAMORPHED AND DEAD, TURNING PEOPLE TO CUM, WITHOUT DOING ANYTHING TO BRING THEM BACK, ALSO KNOWING THAT THEY'RE JUST TURNED INTO A SHITLOAD OF CUM, NOTHING MORE, NOTHING LESS IS BASICALLY KILLING THEM, AND MARK MY WORDS THEY.WILL.HAVE.HELL TO PAY!!!!

YOU HEAR ME?!?!?!??!?!?!Did I mention my voice tripled? like a demon.

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even i have to say, this stuff i usually like, but this, this is messed up and i'd understand if it was chrysalis in disguise, but the shining armor wouldn't act like this

so my face right now
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I think I'll echo the sentiment of everyone else here and say that this was the best cock vore story on this site. Well done.

Seriously. Shining Armour essentially kills not one, not two, but three people without a care.

Definitely one of the best clopfics I've read. Watersports are usually a pretty big no from me, but you made it work. Congrats! :heart:

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