This story is a sequel to If you have sex with a changeling that looks like your beloved and you didn’t know and you end up having a child together, does it count as cheating?
The Handmaiden is the right hoof of the Queen. Bodyguard, Confidant, Friend, Lover, Assassin. These are all roles the Handmaiden may be expected to fill. This is the story of the Handmaiden to Queen Chrysalis, Truth Uso, and her last days as the Handmaiden.
Rated Teen for Violence and Swearing
This Story is actually a prequel, taking place before If You, and therefore contains inherent spoilers. However, the ending to If You spoils this story as well. Read If You if you want a funny plot twist. Read this story if you want a serious plot twist.
Editors:
Superluminous
DictatorDuck
Source leads to title cover art. Untitled cover art here
Seeing as every other weapon has retained its name, I suggest calling them katanas.
Or, in keeping with the slight changes to some words in the MLP universe (somepony, etc.), catanas. Y'know, because... cat and kat sound the same...
Eh, I give up.
..Hrm...
Looking at this, i suspect that the Changelings are based upon Feudal Japan cultures...
The Griffons are clearly Russian..
And the Ponies are English.
4698867 The ponies in the Crystal Empire Region are from up north, yes.
The griffons are Russian because that seems to fannon and I can roll with that.
The Changelings are based on Feudal Japan because I love Japanese culture and I wanted an excuse to give Truth a katana.
4698906 I always imagined them as German.
4698994 Who?
4699093 Griffins. Or perhaps Austrian...
4699244 Hmmmmm..... interesting.
I don't think you need to describe what happened in the raider camp. Truth stated her intentions. The simple fact that she has returned unharmed is enough.
And you don't need a high-action fighting scene in every chapter.
That bloody author's note is borderline torture and you know it you incredibly gifted...PERSON! (I'm on my phone so insert yelling fluttershy here)
4823080 You want If You 3 or not?
4850383 The hell have you been, lovey?
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4854444 *Assassin's Steed.
4854484 I'm glad you like it.
4698906
Mine are Chinese.
I need to say sadly that its way better than if you and I liked if you...
Not sure maybe just that type of stories you write better or just exprience :p
And why it was so short uuugh
You know, it might have been a while, so I could have forgotten, but has Cadence blatantly cheating on Shining Armor for Chrysalis been established at some point? I mean if there was a problem with their relationship because of that, I would remember, but since I don't, did they just basically roll with it? It just doesn't seem to make sense with me.
Well this world building is interesting. Wasn't exactly sure what to expect from the prequels.
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bee should be been
hm should be him
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double space between She brought
... Chitineese. Snrk.
I always thought of griffons as Romans.
D'awwww.