People are like books. You can't judge them by the outside and it's not cool to burn a big pile of them.
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After accidentally spilling one of Apple Bloom's potions during 'Twilight Time', Sweetie Belle is turned into a plushie and when she sees Spike, Sweetie finds this chance to finally admit her secret feelings for him.
However, she's gonna have a hard time with that since no one can hear her talk.
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I like it... nuff' said
Yeah, you could've drawn this out a little longer, maybe to three thousand or four thousand words, but it was still really good!
Yeah, you could've drawn this out a little longer, maybe to three thousand or four thousand words, but it was still really good!
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I was going to make it longer but I've got a case of writers block right now.
4715788 reason I say this could've been longer is because, since this is Sweetie's POV, she could have been taken up by spike who thought she was any other doll and have a cuddle scene. Makes the shipping aspect and a reason for why spike would be embarrassed more explained. But, like I said, it's good nonetheless.
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Oh my gosh, why didn't I think of that?! I literally just wrote up a quick scene of that! Thanks. Now, I'm embarrassed. *facepalms*
Want to know how to get confused in less than one minute?
Did you write this with a phone?
It's not cause its bad, not at all. It's because the quotation marks are the same as a phones.:3
Phone: "Hullo,"
Most Computers: “Hullo,”
:3
Sorry, just curious.
4715878 does that mean I should reread it?
4716081 I prefer the quotations like that. “” those things right there annoy me.
4716208 Ah.Lol. X3
Nice story, BTW.:3
4716208 Oh, NEVERMIND.Its not your story. :P
I mean that towards DiamondBurritos (cool name as well.:3)
4716235 yes, and thank you... One moment, you're about hear from my again.
I love it continue the story!!!!!
4716259 Lol...wait, what? :3
That. Was. Weird. But whatever this a good story
That was...most interesting.
you made think this is your worst but to me its a funny and interesting story.
Sequel
Weird Story
Does Spike really love Sweetie Belle the unicorn or just the plushie?
Dude, you're awesome for actually making this scene.
Awwwwww
MOAR
Awwww.....sweet
4735259 THAT! Would be a really weird fetish.
I thought it was a really cute concept, but I think introducing Spike as Sweetie's crush earlier would make it seem less rushed.
Like, maybe the other crusaders can try to remedy Sweetie's failed magic attempts by saying "Maybe Spike can help you with learning that better. I KNOW you'd like a personal lesson from him!"
Otherwise, I liked the thing. I think the ending was actually really good, but I've always been a fan of open-ended endings. How it just ends on that confession is really strong, and you don't get bogged down in what happens after Sweetie returns to normal.