Twilight Sparkle can have crazy dreams with all the stress of being a princess, but when Celestia's dead spirit appears to her in a dream, Twilight and Celestia go on a ridiculous adventure that shows her the scope of all existence. *PART 5 of the "When" One Shot series. You should read the rest of 'em before reading this.*
What's up with the dislikes? Did I cross a line again, and if I did, tell me. I see a few reasons for disliking, and I will explain why it is that way
1: Celestia is dead. *This is part 5 of the "When" one shot series I'm doing, and Celestia died in part 3 of it. Dead Celestia is canon to this series of stories.*
2: I insulted Bronies/4Chan *Yes I called Bronies creepy and single. I am a Brony. I'm single. I act creepy sometimes. It's not like I made fun of something sensitive. It's comedy, take a joke.*
3: You just don't like it. *Alright, I respect your opinion*
SAO BABY!!!!!!!!! Sorry, that's me current anime. I see what you did...
5360955 Yeahyuh. That's the show that got me hooked on anime. One of the best anime shows ever, if not the best
5361385 someone who understands! Look up ELO on here, the best SAO MLP fic ever. By Shadowflame.
Not going to leave a downvote, but I suspect one problem is the technical quality of the writing. It feels a bit choppy and rushed.
5380306 Yeah that probably does have something to do with it. I was kind of rushing and running out of ideas.