That last line

That chapter ender.

Oh my gosh, Pinkie and Twilight are so cute together! And so are Fluttershy and Sunset! This is the best thing ever! I love how you did the reveal scene with Rainbow, the emotions were perfect. Honestly this is a beautiful story.

>Goes to college
>Gets a girlfriend within a day
>Pretty much ready to fuck all of girlfriend's friends

Twilight be pimpin'

And I gotta say, I wasn't expecting the Fluttershy + Sunset. Never would have seen that coming. Interesting though, so I'll be looking forward to seeing more of it.

I was already following this, but AppleDash makes it even better!

Oh you tease.

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Not too mention the potential AppleDashLight.

5010543 Well so far, it seems that those might just be a 'friends with benefits' thing. The fic's gonna have her go through all of them, most likely. And then there's Flash.

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Diiiiiiiiid someone say Flash?!

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Yes, I know she will likely not end up with him in this fic, but still. dealwithit.jpg

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I just can't help but think that Flash COULD be a good character, if anyone would give him the time of day.
I mean, this fandom generated complex personalities and traits for background extras with less than 5 seconds of screentime. Surely a bland twit like Flash can get somewhere.

(Though I would generally ship him with Sunset, not Twilight. On the other hand, I am liking the sound of this FlutterSet ship...)

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The problem is, he did get screentime. Plenty of it. And all of it was just dull, bland, uninteresting. Doesn't make me want to be interested in him.

FlutterSet does sound interesting. She'd possibly be the one to show the most 'kindness' to her, as it were. Maybe something bloomed from that.

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I can agree with you on that one. Much like Discord, I think Flutters would be the first to really approach Sunset after the whole debacle, and that initial lifeline would probably lead to some feelings building.

Oh, you know I love you, T. It's just fun to see you squirm.

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I'm so disappointed in DM29's art. It's adorable, for the most part, but then he posts so much FlashLight... boo, boo!

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Oh, let people have their fun. Besides, 90% of the artists in the fandom give you more than enough AppleDash to sate you. Give us this one. Live and let ship, man.

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Enough Appledash?

NEVER!

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That's true. Aforementioned background ponies usually had some kind of quirk that grabbed people's interest in some way. Like weird sitting positions or an adorable bow tie. Flash had....um, jack diddly.

I dunno, maybe Rainbow rocks will give us more to work with. Regardless, i don't really care for Flashlight, in the sense I prefer most other ships. I don't actively hate it though. (Not like TwiCord.)

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There was a bit of him in one of the trailers/peeks at the new movie, and it somehow made me dislike him even more! Ah well.

“Whoa, whoa whoa, Pinkie.” Rainbow Dash held up her hands. “At least give us a little time to clear the smoke after you drop a bombshell like that.” She turned her eyes on Sunset. “You came from the same place, right? So, if there’s another Twilight here, why isn’t there another Sunset Shimmer?”

“There is; I looked her up.” Sunset shrugged with her free hand. “She moved out of the country with her parents way before I showed up.”

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WELL DONE! I was hoping you'd fill that plot-hole! now to read the rest of the chapter. I just had to comment on that.

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They were going for distance, not speed. It obviously depends on the person, but most people will be able to build up some extra pressure by stretching out the time to completion.

If they'd been somewhere more private, they would have been at it for an hour, at least. All for one shot.

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Aww, I think it's cute how adorkable he gets over Twi. Of course with that Twilight he doesn't have to deal with a big 'ol trouser snake (though I'm sure someone out there has written that version too).

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I saw Sunset wipe the frosting off Fluttershy's face in the preview and I just about died.

I sort of envision that Sunset still has some demons (heh) lurking in her mind over what happened at CHS. Who better to show her some kindness when she needs it most?

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Innit, though? I very much hope they give him a bit more to do this time around... if for nothing else to watch Tchernobog squirm.

And hey, who's to say that he wouldn't like a "big 'ol trouser snake?" While I wish you would have them end up together, I still look forward to how you'll handle it. Will he be immediately turned on? Or will he need some coaxing?

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Now, now, that's no way to act.

If you kill yourself whenever you come across anything even a little bit different, you're going to end up going through a lot of bullets.

5011727 It's a good thing magical girls like myself can't die this way then, huh?

You fucking cocktease.

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Hey, interpersonal relationships are kind of a big deal. I'm just making sure no one gets their feelings hurt by jumping into bed with each other.

5012098 no, I mean not showing the contest!

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Oh, that.

Well, there really isn't a whole lot of variety in describing a couple people jerking off while watching each other, so it would have just dissolved into a bunch of tedium. I'm here to explore these characters' feelings rather than the coefficient of friction of their skin. On the other hand, the next couple chapters will contain a lot more detail on that front, so don't count me out just yet.

5010909 What with the angry Rarity?! (Exclamation point out of shock, not anger)

Splendid. More, please.

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More like AppleDashLightPie. What you think Pinkie would give up a chance to be with Twilight and Dashie? Cmon it is already clear that both Pinkie and Dash are attracted to each other but neither are doing anything because AJ likes being monogamous.

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Good

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I wasn't bothered by your lack of description regarding the jacking off, but now that I think about it, I probably wouldn't have described the jacking off, rather I would have compared the differing styles.

Twilight strikes me as the kind of person who would do it with the maximum of efficiency, having studied many works on the subject, both ametuer and professional (mostly discarding the professional, as they are designed to look good for the camera, rather than provide pleasure for the actors) to find the quickest and easiest way to get herself off.

Rainbow Dash would do it quickly and violently, frantically rubbing herself in a race to the finish line. She knows that if touches herself here and pinches herself there until it borders on pain, she can get a fucking good cum out of it. The first few times with Applejack seemed more like tease and denial at the pace that AJ goes at.
While I'm on a roll, here's how I'd imagine the rest of the girls to go about doing things.
Pinkie probably doesn't use her hands. She probably has a toychest filled with dildos, vibrators, buttplugs and other assorted fun stuff. She's the kind of person you go to if you wanted advice on what kind of sex-toy would suit your needs, as she has tried most of them or knows which ones to recommend for those who go out where she goes in.

Applejack is of the school that a slow buildup leads to the best harvest. She rarely shlicks, as she would need to set aside a couple of hours to do things properly. Her first few times with Dash were fast and not as enjoyable.

Fluttershy probably had the second-largest toy collection because some people thought that it would be funny to mail her animal dildos. Jokes on them though, as she thoroughly enjoyed them. Sometimes, she wishes she had the courage to send in designs for mythical or chimeric creatures to the animal dildo makers. She also wishes that the cat dildoes were a bit more realistic, though she would only use that on Shimmer for when she's been a very bad girl and needs to be punished.

Rarity does not "jack off". Rarity pours herself some wine, lights some candles, draws a hot bath and slowly romances herself elegantly. She is a gasper. Probably has the least developed technique, as for her, it's all about the build-up than the crecendo.

Shimmer uses other peoples hands, after all why do something when you can get others to do it for you, right? She WAS a Pillow Queen of the highest order until her first time with Fluttershy, who, after getting Shimmer off, looked into her eyes and Shimmer knew that she was but a peon in the ways of manipulation compared to Fluttershy and those eyes. What the Fluttershy Eyes did not solve, Mistress Dragonfly did with her commanding voice and That. Stare. Shimmer has learned that there is nothing better than reciprocal pleasure, though there are a few times that shes had to go to the self-service pump as the petrol station of love. Flutters is in total control of that relationship.

Aaaand thats enough talking about pastel-people-based-off-of-pastel-ponies masturbatory habits and sexual practices for me. Brain Bleach can be found to your left.

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You're hired.

But seriously, I might do the contest as a bonus scene later on. At the time, I didn't see anything specific in the scene that would advance the character interactions. In which case, I err on the side of caution and cut myself off before I fall to heavily into the mechanics. It's a defense mechanism.

Also: I may have to borrow 'Mistress Dragonfly'. I like that.

Please no flash sentry!! he is such a tool!! have Trixie have a dick! or daring doo! but not flash sentry!!!! We beg you!

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Now, now, that's a little unfair toward Flash. We didn't really see much of him in the movie, so maybe he's a nice guy, if a bit eager. In any case, it will be interesting to see how he deals with the fact that this is a different Twilight than the one he met before and (if they get that far, not telling yet ) how he reacts to her extra equipment.

As for the rest, since the human world doesn't have magic (at least not on the level that Equestria does), Twilight will be the only girl with anything significantly different going on in her pants. I don't intend to push the limits of reality any further than I have already.

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Its just I find flash super creepy, with his "Oops I did not see you, or we need to stop running into each other" act.... he was just trying to get laid. I know that's what Clop fic's are for, but I still want better for Twilight, If that makes any sense

damn, now I cant wait for the next installment

I poked my head into this story out of curiosity on the premise, but, like, wow. You do a really, really good job of being really respectful of the subject matter here and all the complicated emotional issues that arise with it. Definitely not what I expected to see in a story I originally figured would just be silly explicit content! So well done!

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Good call.

Certain predilections aside, I'm here for the character interactions.

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(Pssst, if anyone wants to steal that idea, gopher it!)

I would but I only have a Prairie Dog...

nailed it

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About ten minutes later, one of the strangest sexual competitions ever held anywhere ended in a draw.

Na, there's probably been stranger