This story is about a guardian who fought for the freedoms of humanity and their allies. When on a mission given to her by the Vanguard she was thrust into a world much different from her own. Now follow Xaya the Awoken as she struggles to stay with the Travelers light. So she may finally return to the tower and fulfill her awaiting Destiny.
Love it so far.
Nu!!! I'm still on Mars! Me no want spoilurs!
5031432 No need to be alarmed. As of now I shall keep this spoiler free since there won't be much of the solar system in this fic. Aside from flashbacks and such.
5031997 Thank u, m8.
First Destiny crossr so far (well from what I seen its the first)
You forget the "t" in with
5035178 Oh. Thanks for letting me know.
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A lot of vex, cabal, hive and fallen die... DUN DUN DUUNNN
5038618 HORREH SHEET
Your intro could use some work and you might want to get an editor but other than that I liked it
It was only a matter of time.
So they are throwing all the aliens into one group? If Xaya doesn't reveal she's friendly this could get ugly.
Will read as soon as I wake up tomorrow. I gotta say, This looks very promising from the comments, and thumbs-ups. Anyway, I'll probably comment a lot once I start reading. that's a habit of mine.
Took longer than I wanted to get to reading this. but woo! this is so awesome!
I got the game, but as of yet, I can't even play it. I don't have a HDD for my 360.....
When is chapter 3
Big issues I immediately spotted are a severe lack of imagery, missing commas, and rapid pacing. Still pretty neat though, I'll give a more clear analysis when it isn't four AM and I'm not on my phone.
What do you mean "Non-Existent"? also, awesome so far, really enjoying the ride.
im also likeing it
I just stand in the doorway and shoot him with Ice Breaker
5533104 I fixed that spelling mistake. I hadn't even realized it until now.
Keep on writing, I really like your story its better then most.
5675805 Agreed
Don't worry about it, I've had things to do to, just don't stop writing completely!
The feels! To strong.....
Good story so far and don't worry about not updating life should always come first just take your time!
This story is great. Life comes first then this take your time though
6088851 It has been quite some time since I've checked. I'm so glad that there are still people who believe in me. Thanks a million.
6070145 You as well, thank you so much. My days have been pretty hectic but just bare with me and I'll try harder.
That goes for everyone. If you would like to see something new, or you have suggestions on how I can improve on the overall experience don't hesitate to let me know. Thank you all!
Glad to see a new chapter.
The CMC was a bit abrupt but workable, and a s a side-note.. I think the guardians overpaid..not that there's a official conversion rate for Glimmer to Bits at this time.
6267125 Noted.
What do you mean I exist.
Is Xaya an awoken?
6279954 yes
I like it but in my opinion I just do t like the cmc finding the alien purple thing and knowing how to use right off the bat
6466697 Oh splendid! Happy birthday to you good sir!
Oh, a hungarian character? Rare to see my country in a story, sweet!
Eliksni is the proper spelling of the Fallen's true name