Flight School Shower Fun

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The Blessed One

The Blessed One #1 · Feb 23rd, 2015 · · ·

It was a good first try at clop, very good as a matter of fact.

9/10. My only critique, is that I wish you would have written a prequel/sequel explaining in more detail the whole Gender/Bending thing.

Other then that, I did like it. Have a like and a favorite from the Old Blessed One.

Thallium

Thallium #2 · Feb 26th, 2015 · · ·

Not bad for a first go :3

It did feel a little bit rushed, perhaps pad the sex scene out a little bit longer. And some explanation about the gender swapping would have been nice.

Ardent Dusk

Ardent Dusk #3 · Mar 23rd, 2015 · · ·

No this may become into writer block but its so goooood D:

Aceofspades69

Aceofspades69 #4 · Mar 24th, 2015 · · ·

I liked it besides being to short and sone small errors

iamli3

iamli3 #5 · Mar 24th, 2015 · 1 · ·

whaaat you go to the lengths to make a reason why the tg happened with it being a family cures but you don't do anything with it and just make a purely for clop fic?....

orgo-member-XV

orgo-member-XV #6 · Mar 28th, 2015 · · ·

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Oh no no no Solar Flare is a character in another one of my stories that I didn't submit to here I just used his for a clopfic right now i'm in the process of making a prequel to the story explaining and even highlighting some more of the TG that happens to him don't worry.

iamli3