• Published 9th May 2012
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Oh Soarin' - ParrishVanity



Something VERY random, I made this up in like 15 minutes. The song is Fallen Star - Blood on the Dan

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Incomplete and All Alone

Eternal pain; something I will take to my grave

Your memory is an image I just can't erase



Soarin' just blinked at Rainbow, unsure on how to tell her what happened. Maybe it was best if he didn't? For Celestia's sake! She was watching him. He began to wonder if he should fly away and move, or stay and tell her. He went with the best idea... tell her.


I spend my life always walking in the shadows

Scared, alone; locked away inside my castle

And when you love something, they say set it free

If it don't come back, it wasn't meant to be

"Well, Spitfire is the kind of mare to toy with your emotions and leave you behind after she has had her fun.."
"So, she left you... alone?"
"Basically, I don't know WHY I let her do that. I should have saw it coming."
"So, you practice with her right?"
"I can't make eye contact with her, too much heartbreak, ya know?"
"Oh, well... I'm sorry Soarin', you'll always have me, right? I'll be your friend." Rainbow punched Soarin's shoulder.
"I guess that makes it a little better."
"Terrific," Rainbow said with a small smile. Soarin' smiled back at her.


I destroy everything I touch

Even things I love too much

I am cursed with these hands

They will never understand

I don't want to let you go

Incomplete and all alone

Rainbow hopped up off the cloud and hovered next to Soarin' "So, how about we go to Sugarcube Corner and get all these sappy emotions out of us? Pinkie should be throwing a party or something. You never know what that pink pony is gonna do." She said shaking her head.
Soarin' smiled and nodded. "Well, sure, Rainbow, how about a friendly race over there?"
"Oh, you're challenging the one and only Rainbow Dash now, eh? Well, flyboy, you're ON!"
Soarin' just laughed.

Here I am waiting for my sacred true love

With these hands that will reach out like a scarecrow


Soarin' landed in front of Sugarcube Corner, Rainbow was a-little-tiny-bit-of-a-nose-with-a-feather behind him, as Pinkie would say.
"Well, Rainbow, looks like you just got beat."
"HA! Fat chance! I was TOTALLY the winner," Rainbow said jabbing her hoof on his chest.
Soarin' just snickered at her, "Whatever you say, Rainbow."
"Whatever, flyboy, lets go eat, I'm STARVING!"


When you love something, they set it free

If it don't come back, it wasn't meant to be

I destroy everything I touch

Even things I love too much

I am cursed with these hands

They will never understand

I don't want to let you go

Incomplete and all alone

After Soarin's and Rainbows adventures in Sugarcube Corner, Soarin' couldn't help but wonder if he still liked Rainbow. Sure, they were together for a year, but he wasn't sure. Him and Spitfire weren't really... dating? I guess just friends with benefits. Hell, he lost his appetite for a lot of things. What disturbed him the most, was how much he hadn't eaten an apple pie. It seemed like Soarin' was spiraling down life. He was cursed with his hooves, he destroies everything he touches.
"So, Soarin' it seems to be getting late, we should head home."
"Yeah, I guess."
Rainbow smiled, "Soarin, you will always have me as a friend, ya know? I'll always lend a helping hoof."
Soarin' gave a weak smile. "I guess, Rainbow... thanks."
Rainbow nuzzled his head "No prob, look, maybe we can hang out next week? Say.. Saturday?"
"Sure."
Both pegasi departed, saying their farewells. Soarin' went to go and think at his house.

I destroy everything I touch

Even things I love too much

I am cursed with these hands

They will never understand

I don't want to let you go

Incomplete and all alone



Soarin' arrived home and he went up to his bedroom to lay down and think.
'Rainbow is so amazing, I wish confidence could come to me like that, I guess shes one special pony to be able to put something up like that,' he started thinkming more and more about her. 'She is kind of cute, with her tone body and rainbow mane, and that exotic cutie mark. A patch of cloud with a red, yellow, and blue lightning bolt... perfection.'
Soarin' shook his head 'Dude, what are you THINKING? She likes you as a friend, nothing more. I wish she did though, it'd be nice.' Soarin's ears drooped down. He just ran circle on with hooves on his bed, thinking.


Uh oh uh oh

I'm incomplete and all alone

Uh oh uh oh



That was when Soarin' relised. Maybe.... she DID like him more than a friend? Unsure on how to act if he didn't like her more than that. Soarin' got up and walked downstairs, got out a big apple pie and ate. After eating, he went back up to his bedroom to think more on the subject. He fell asleep thinking of Rainbow...
"I don't want to let you go.."





I don't want to let you..... go....

Comments ( 4 )

why is it that when i find a good soarin/dash fic it is never complete oh well better fav and follow
i freaking :heart: this fic cant wait for the next chapter
keep up the good work

Comment posted by FireFlash13231 deleted Mar 27th, 2013

5365486 honestly, i didn't know i knew any of these people untill now

I love this fanfic! It maybe short BUT! It has style, plus I love your rhythms! They shed light on the real experiences of life! And make come think a lot!! Keep up the amazing writing! Can. Not. Wait. Until. Next. Chapter! :pinkiehappy:

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