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Exiled from Light

Exiled from Light #1 · Jun 16th, 2015 · 1 · 1 · Epilogue ·

This story seems a bit rushed. There's more telling than showing. The pacing is quite bad.

You're lucky that I took it easy on you.

Comment posted by defender_Blitz__Eloi deleted Jun 16th, 2015

defender_Blitz__Eloi

defender_Blitz__Eloi #4 · Jun 16th, 2015 · · · Epilogue ·

You and me both want twinkies.

Voiceguy

Voiceguy #5 · Jun 17th, 2015 · · · Epilogue ·

Why use your own name as a username for a website?

defender_Blitz__Eloi

defender_Blitz__Eloi #6 · Jun 17th, 2015 · · · Epilogue ·

I could not think of a good name for me, sorry.

Malice In Wonderland

Malice In Wonderland #7 · Jun 23rd, 2015 · 1 · · Epilogue ·

That was cute. I liked it. I hope you write more stories like this.

defender_Blitz__Eloi

defender_Blitz__Eloi #8 · Jun 23rd, 2015 · · · Epilogue ·

Thanks, if you look at my blog, I have three more shipping stories. Those will be the last three "love stories" before my big project that will do nothing with shipping. Thanks for the complement,

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