This... doesn't fit Twilight's paradigm at all (well, maybe having "toys" might be plausible, I could see her getting curious if she read "those" types of books every so often). dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png Whatever, it's decent, I guess. The writing didn't kill me, so there's that.
okay wow, thank you everypony... just three things, 683751 yes, yes indeed 678434 thank you for the most round about way ever to make a complement. and last but not least, to everyone, there is more to come, if my med board ever hurries up.
She sported a nice whipped cream 'stash, to a round of giggles from the ponies there. "What? Whats so funny?" "Nuthin' Rainbow Stash," Applejack said with a laugh.
it's "'stache". Stash has an entirely different connotation -- in Rainbow's case, it'd obviously suggest LSD. (the rhyme still works)
THIS...IS...AMAZING! OHMIGOSHOHMIGOSHOHMIGOSHOHMIGOSHOHMIGOSH! YOU NEED TO MAKE LOTS OF CHAPTERS!
I want to see the love life and a long story between rarity and twilight, and I want to see the one work out between sweetie belle and spike. MOAR!
Well, Twilight/Rarity is not a combination I see too often, I commend you for making this. Hope to see more.
This... doesn't fit Twilight's paradigm at all (well, maybe having "toys" might be plausible, I could see her getting curious if she read "those" types of books every so often). dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png Whatever, it's decent, I guess. The writing didn't kill me, so there's that.
Hey, not everyone thinks Twilight was a virgin...
I'll see where this one leads, though. If nothing else the pairing interests me!
Uh oh now the characters are gonna ship other characters?
*grabs popcorn* This is gonna be good.
This was good.
Make moar chapters, i hate to see a great story, with great opportunity go to waste
okay wow, thank you everypony... just three things, 683751 yes, yes indeed 678434 thank you for the most round about way ever to make a complement. and last but not least, to everyone, there is more to come, if my med board ever hurries up.
You had me at Twilight in socks.
Unless your a lock smith! you're
Snapping too though, to
...quickly snapping her flank with her tail to a small yip and a lusty look form Twilight. from
She sported a nice whipped cream 'stash, to a round of giggles from the ponies there. "What? Whats so funny?"
"Nuthin' Rainbow Stash," Applejack said with a laugh.
it's "'stache". Stash has an entirely different connotation -- in Rainbow's case, it'd obviously suggest LSD.
(the rhyme still works)