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Silver Package: the comment driven narrative

When a multiverse to another world is open, it's obvious that Hasbro is getting involved. Now you have Derpy coming to live with you... I just don't know what went wrong.

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Gypsybard

Gypsybard #1 · Jan 31st, 2016 · 1 · ·

I like this concept, but it would be hard to work with.
And by the way I think silver spoon should say where's the hot tub while thinking your suppose to be rich.

Zoetic Zebra

Zoetic Zebra #2 · Jan 31st, 2016 · 1 · ·

6889455 thank you, I honestly feel like deleting all my stories, since I don't like them and no one ever commented on this one.

Haloboy11721

Haloboy11721 #3 · Sep 17th, 2017 · · ·

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Don't do that m8. I'll be sad if you do. :'( Anyway. I think he should say something like this. "H~hello. My name is (Insert main characters name here.), It's nice to meet you Silver Spoon, But to be frank. I actually ordered Derpy, not you. So I'm sorry if I seem a little down in the dumps right now." that's the best I can do. (For now.) :P lates bros.