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After some traveling, Trixie eventually finds herself with a group of archaeologists digging up some ancient ruins. Due to a brief encounter with a being from another world, Trixie finds herself in the world of pokémon. Follow Trixie as she goes on an adventure like never she's ever experienced, meeting new friends and discovering new sights.

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Trixie: YES! YES!! CRUSH TRIXIE'S ENEMIES!!! >:D

Yes! I love Giratina messes with Equestria stories! And there are so few of them!
You have caught my eye. This story will be tracked like a deer.

“Wow! I’ve never seen anything like this! And believe Trixie, she has seen many things,” Trixie said as she finished the scan.
“You’re right! This magic is like something out of this world!” the other unicorn approved.
“So, is it safe to take?” Daring Do asked.
“I think so,” Trixie answered.
“Excellent work, team!” Daring Do grabbed the gem and put it in her saddlebag. “I would believe we’re done for to-”

No surprise there. It's from out of this world, so of course they should touch it. Dumb equines, and that one random griffon.

I think I will not take this story seriously. But that's fine, because I'm expecting a fun ride.

This is going to be interesting. I'm not much of a Pokemon fan, so you'll have the opportunity to see how well the story works with the uninitiated. I'm assuming the golem Trixie set off is the same as the one in the story art and your avatar pic.

The only thing I feel I can object to right now is that Daring Do's crew could have deserved a little more fleshing out. I know, they're not important to the story and likely won't appear beyond this one chapter, but they could at least have had names, since it was a little jarring to have them mentioned as "the unicorn" or "the griffon". The fact that a griffon was mentioned at all made me think he/she was important somehow.

On an unrelated note, introducing Trixie as a bit of a wandering adventurer who's teamed up with Daring Do of all ponies is absolutely excellent, and really fits her. If this wasn't about Pokemon, that there could be the setting for a story where they explore ruins and fight ancient evils.

Now, on to Pokemon, and all its adventures! Trixie needs to become the very best, like nopony ever was.

This is goin' swell so far! I enjoyed the I'm-not-a-pokemon misunderstanding.

Interesting, I'd like to see where this goes :3

I can actually imagine Trixie wanting to get a few pokemon for her future shows.

Trixie Pokemon

Ditto

Trixie- Why have one pokemon when you can have them all?

Altaria

Trixie would have fun showing off her flying dragon to Twilight knowing Twilight would go into that is a bird not a dragon rant followed up with proof resulting in I'm fixing your magic book right now cause that's a bird lesson zero crazy rant. XD

Eevee

Having a creature capable of multiple evolutions would be up Trixie's alley and knowing Trixie she would probably find a way to keep Eevee's evolutions temporary after all what trainer could be able to boast that her one and only Eevee transformed into all eight possible Eevee forms?

Tyrunt

Trixie with a T-rex! Or Aurous! Either way Trixie would have a dinosaur since only the Great and Powerful Trixie could tame a dinosaur!

Trixie will be annoyed, terrified and or amused of these not part of her show fan pokemon...

Teddiursa

Trixie could be terrified of bears and the pokemon just follows the group ie Jigglypuff or Cynthia catches it for her trying to get Trixie over her ursa fear.

Haunter

He scares Trixie sure, but that he would also scare Twilight.

Ponyta

Another ponyta has a crush on Trixie

Other pokemon Trixie would have

Ralts, Mew, Diancie, Magicarp (Imagine Rainbow Dash making fun of the weak fish...XD Trixie would certainly take pleasure in having her Magicarp transform in front of as many ponies as possible), Mew maybe Mime Jr...Vulpix...it's Trixie whatever she has will blow the audience away! :D

I am greatly enjoying this...while Twilight and company is most likely going nuts over Trixie's disappearance, Trixie is going on a one of a kind adventure, making friends, seeing a new world...and knowing Trixie she's going to enter every battle and contest she can find! :D

I look forward to seeing other people stare in awe at the Great and Powerful Trixie!!! :D

7317472 All interesting ideas, but most kinda are conflicting on what I have planned. Most. The Altaria idea is sold!

Really? I thought for sure it would be an Eevee too...but I'm glad about Altaria...messing with Twilight's head is always fun! ????

As long as there is no snakes I'm good and can't wait to see what Trixie ends up with! ????

Another random thought...what if Trixie tried to get a picture with every single pokemon? That would empress Daring for sure cause Twilight to stare and silence her critics saying yeah right ????

7319076 Thing is, I want to concentrate on Trixie's adventure in the pokémon world, meaning there will be very little Equestria. But that Altaria bit just has to happen.

Eevee is very tempting. I'll brainstorm for a while to see if I can fit it. I don't want to force it too much.

^^; wow...that's the last time I use my phone to reply to comments instead of my desktop...^^;

Like I said random. ;)

No problem there. Your story, your twists, your roller coaster ride of messing with people's heads as much as possible! :D I completely understand keeping Trixie focused in Pokemon land...that world needs Trixie! :D

XD As I said...driving Twilight nuts is FUN. XD

Yep. Sure perfectly understand...writing is like driving a stagecoach....your imagination takes flight and your there for the ride. :)

Here's hoping you end up in featured soon! :)

Am I the only one who can see trixie having a zorroa?

“There, there, Bonesy. Mama’s here. You’re safe now.”

:derpyderp1:
:rainbowlaugh:

Welp, two chapters in and you're earning a thumb. Not bad, not bad.

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I feel ashamed you suggested haunter...Mismagius fits much better.

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i feel like trixie would have a lunatone and/or a zora/zoroark

Ok, asuuminng Golork is one of the three, that leaves three slots. Zoroark, Dusclops, Klefki, Ariados, Carbink, Gardevoir, Swanna, and maybe Charizard are all good Pokemon for her to have. Any combo of them would be interesting. Especially if she can cast a spell so others can understand them and they go to Equestria.

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