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RayDawn


I'm a College Student who mostly reads fanfics of a show intended for little girls. This is really weird...

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My name is Vinyl Scratch and I'm one of the loudest people at Canterlot High School. My music makes me loud, not my voice, because I am mute. I wasn't always like this, I used to talk, but then "it" happened. What is"it?" I'll tell you.

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My attempt at Vinyl's backstory and a fully 1st person story. Wrote this also because Vinyl doesn't talk and I researched how mutism can occur.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

This story is practically done. It just needs the wrap-up with Octavia and the Humane Six catching up to Vinyl. Maybe an apology from Principal Celestia but the readers don't necessarily need to read that. Why was this rated 'Mature' though?

+Frankie2 I put mature due to some plans I had, but scrapped, thanks for reminding me to change to teen. Also, wrap up is all that's left.

She always got like this when we talked about my being in the Rainbooms.

I'm confused on what you mean but I think you meant me

7108729 dude I think this story could keep going in a sequel like the guy that did it escapes and go's after Vinyl and Octavia:pinkiehappy:

7112871 Thanks for that idea. I'll give you a shout-out when i write it. Or do you want to write it?

7112917 can't write good, I can come up with ideas but forget them before I can put it on paper :fluttercry::derpytongue2:

It took me some time writing this. Mainly because of procrastination,

dude, that was fast compared to other start to finish story times

Btw I will give the inmate a name, but I haven't thought of one yet...

just don't use pedo file
Also can you tell me on my page when you get that sequel is up

7113471 alright then. Also, i don't think pedo phile would be a good name at all. I never would've thought of that. About my upload time... Ch 1 to ch 2 has less time between than ch 2 to ch 3. The spacing between the uploads is double...

7113690 the reason behind that is it has sadly bin done before that would be sad if you went with that anyway

I had a feeling that a sequel may be in the works. I don't know how to feel about that. We'll see though.

A very lovely story and a fun read. I'll be honest, the first chapter got my teary eyed, and the rest of the story was fun. Good job.

My mouth moved like it always does, but sound came out. "Hey Tavi!" I dreaded seeing Tavi. This was that day. The day everything changed. "You all set to go with my parents and me?" I smiled a crooked smile.

"Yes, but it's my parents and I ." Tavi corrected me.

Vinyl is correct because removing the 'my parents and' bit, it would just be "You all set to go with me?". You wouldn't say "You all set to go with I?"

My mouth moved like it always does, but sound came out. "Hey Tavi!" I dreaded seeing Tavi. This was that day. The day everything changed. "You all set to go with my parents and me?" I smiled a crooked smile.

"Yes, but it's my parents and I ." Tavi corrected me.

Vinyl is correct because removing the 'my parents and' bit, it would just be "You all set to go with me?". You wouldn't say "You all set to go with I?"

A realization hit me that threatened to break me. We are all united...except me. I will never lend my voice to the crowd because I don't have one. I began to shake and sob without sound and as I stood up and caused a really loud scratching noise to happen. All eyes were on me and I turned around and ran. I could hear Tavi screaming for me and a couple other voices, the Rainbooms, after her. I let out a guttural sound, my form of expressing pain, as I ran.

Poor Vinyl feels alone in terms of being unable to speak, the poor dear... :fluttershysad:

Damn you, insensitive Principal Celestia...

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