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Hmm, interesting chapter, keep them coming
It was good, not too hard to follow at all. I feel like NM is trouble though![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
Kinda wanna see her drawn in the same style as the cover art.
Unlike 7308324 's understanding. I found that it was a little confusing with the nightmare moon part. But, whatever... I'll roll with it. :)
7308372 Now that their minds are connected NM can now visit Ryan's mind and see his darker half as well. That's what I get from it and previous chapters.
7308819 Sounds cool if that's what he's planning.
Rushed? Maybe. Confusing? Slightly. Great chapter? Ohh, most defiantly.![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
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A bit confusing when u switch from reality to the minds, but not to hard to figure it out. And great chapter, keep up the good work.
Interesting i like it, but i still prefer bad hero for my comedy fix.
Looks like both sides of Luna and Ryan are becoming quite closer.
Yeah, I'm gonna have to stop here. I thought I was gonna read through to the end, but I've lost interest. Not only because of the many grammar errors and misuse of words (especially "allot" when it should be "a lot"), but the characters just seem to be all over the place and I still couldn't get a good grasp on who they are even up to now.
I won't leave a [dis]like, but I thought I should put my opinions out there before I call it a day.
7838887 I understand, there's a lot I need to improve on and quite a few things that I miss in editing. I appreciate the feedback though. I guess I'll just have to start working harder.
I don't know whether to find that cute or disturbing.
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