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Love dis chapter
Now some guards will be scared with him, not letting him pissed off.
I love it how did you use Silver, she is like his little sister. I really want to see when he meets Spike and the others of mane six. I want to laugh a lot.
Amazing job man.
Very nice, great to see Ryan recovering. Sorry Chryssie that's called karma and you had it coming
So...
Chrysalis is Dead?
7398050 Unless changling queens have some really weird biology in this story, then yes, yes she is.
Shoulda really thrown in the song somewhere bro. Woulda been a good natured slap in the face!
Chrysalis has done goof.
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=JWP9N3C46YU
Because of the warning last chapter, I skipped it. I can only try to piece together what happened. The gist of it:
Ryan befriended Silver; the guards were going to do something to her; Ryan's dark side was released; the lucky changelings just got the crap beat outta them (the others, like Chrysalis, died a brutal death); Luna's guards show up; Ryan goes on the attack; Luna is forced to knock him out; the dark side is once again contained...for now; Ryan doesn't remember a thing.
Does that sum it up?
7622225 Yep :P
I guess they have a kid now
Ryan i love you ❤
Wow, if Ryan mopped up the whole hive including the queen that should trigger the sole survivor, Silver, to become a young queen...
Or not...
If so, then...
Considering how crappily Silver was treated by her own kind & to how she's positively/lovingly treated by Ryan, Luna, etc. she'll likely grow up to be different kind of changeling & queen...
Just don't ever leave Silver alone with super freaky Cadence... If you know what I'm saying... (Insert double facehoof with wings, because a facehoof is just not enough)...
All that aside, I came across your tall tale while taking a break from the other stories I've been reading. I have to say that this is an interesting hie/anthro combo. It's been very entertaining with the twist & turn plot, the main protagonist is a big mix up of vulgar to shock the poor innocent ponies, digs for the sake of a running gag(s), has enough lightness/darkness for the Lunar Princess & is an all around semi good natured jackass to all save those who are well deserving of his ire &/or beastial wrath...
The chapters feel a little rushed at times, however, if I read correctly in the past comments that this is an early example of your work. So, I imagine that will work out in later stories...
Overall, I really dig your story & I'm invested in what happens to the main characters. So, I'm in until the end...
Cheers
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All I can say right now is thank you. I really appreciate all of that. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.