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Dinodisneylover1


A young man with autism, who is a fan of many things. But especially 'My Little Pony G4'.

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Halloween is drawing near at Canterlot High. Sunset Shimmer, her friends and all the students are preparing everything. But our heroes have no idea that they have to face old enemies again. And to make matters worse, those enemies allied themselves with some of the most notorious villains the worlds have ever seen. Disney/MLP Crossover.

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This is a pretty interesting premise, and I like the idea of the mlp characters having to deal with these famous Disney villains.

The Disney villains cannot die yet, they're just missing in action.

7596572 Believe me. There will be action.

Hehehe now I'm engaged with where this is gonna go. There are a few issues with the overall pace and the scant amount of dialogue in between the villains, but then again, there's a lot of characters to work with here so I can't fault that. Keep up the good work!

i jsut have to ask why are you writing human fluttershy like she is pony fluttershy they have similarities yes but they also have differences human fluttershy is no where near as afraid of things as pony fluttershy

notice she did not screma or run away from the gaia everfree story in legend of everfree for example it scared her yes but not badly and when the real threat showed up she just dead panned about how this always happens to them

7613308 I thought that was still a bit part of her personality. Pony and human version.

The Dazzlings appear in this story, right?

what happen next chapter? please I need to know. also there a muics from the movie it called house of villain it based from the show house of mouse and there song called it our house now use on the next chapter or other chapter and soon the girls will team up the other Disney heroes in the future.

7782084 Well, I was thinking of using the song in the chapter after the next chapter. I'm not going to give spoilers, but in the next chapter the villains are still spying a bit on the girls.

Just one question for all the lovable readers of my story: do you want some of the Disney heroes to appear too? Or do you only want Human 7 against the Dazzlings and the Disney villains? The choice is yours.

I am going to use a very special character or two from our childhood Disney years in the story. But like I said before, I don't give spoilers or it'll ruin the story.

Give me your answer for my questions and I'll think about.

I just made one last change in the first chapter. Two short Youtube videos that I think you will like. Next chapter will be coming up soon.

oh no, it gonna be their world. also put it our house now (from the house of villain) pardoy song for the next chapter please? finally it here

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Thanks for responding to my comment about fixing the grammatical and spelling errors I saw.

I'm sorry about deleting it by accident, I don't know why that happened.

Unfortunately, I don't know how to get it back.

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It's okay. I corrected all the mistakes just in time.

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Can you please look over the other chapter too?

If you want I can help you look out for something wrong.

(Replacing comment that which I deleted before I saw your reply. Sorry about that. Again)

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