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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

Comments ( 15 )

Wow, good start! I'm betting that the cult's thing worked, but only on Daring Do/A.K. Yearling.

Wow, I was right! They were the only one's affected!

What a great story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ya know, reading this, kinda wish someone had done this with the actual Mane Six, would be interesting.

What is self-cest?

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Sex with yourself.

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A fic where there's another version of the same character, and they eventually have sex or are just shipped.

...jokes aside, you have my attention. Noticed a few typographical errors here and there, but overall your writing is really good and this is set up pretty nicely so far. Looking forward to more! ^^

The reactions would be priceless in the morning.

Can't believe I'm saying this about a selfcest fic of all things, but this was cute.

Also,

She glanced over at Yearling and frowned. She still didn’t know what to say, even after a week, about her counterpart’s new species

I'm pretty sure species would be better replaced with race. Ponies can breed with one another and the offspring is, outside of magical mishaps, an earth pony, a pegasus, or unicorn based on the parents own subraces and I'm sure a shitload of other genetic information required to code for innate magical control and dictate race.

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I prefer "tribe". It avoids some of the baggage associated with race.

Not bad overall but not great either. For a clopfic it felt slow and underwhelming, but for a romance it was probably too fast and felt a bit artificial.
Despite its shortcomings, it is probably the best selfcest romance on FimFic.

Happyfics like this arent quite as common anymore...

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