A changeling named Emerald Blaze came to Ponyville trying to escape the past he never wanted. He finds himself with two new friends who both have mysterious past. When Emerald Blaze finds out their secrets he needs to to go back to what he did before he left his hive. If Blaze wants to protect his friends there will be blood in his wake.
Sorry it's taking so long but I need to find time to right it I have the next three characters mostly planed out
For the love of Christ, find an editor. It's WEREwolf, not wearer wolf.
Don't you mean werewolf?
There is a lot of stuff grammatically wrong with this In just the first sentence we see this.
Just this sentence has quite a bit that can be amended, such as putting the comma before the end quotation and adding an end quotation to the last bit of dialogue.
With just those changes, and a few others, it would look like this.
I would also recommend adding more description to the characters. I have not read very far into the story yet so I can't see your vision, but you could turn that sentence into something way better. For example, add some extra description. It could look something more like this.
Honestly, I didn't get far enough into this to see any major plot points, just because the amount of grammar mistakes is so massive that it detracts from the experience.
Kildeez I know I suck at spelling and i have no friends that know I'm a Brony that are brony
And are any of you having trouble following the story
And that's spell checks fault
Spellings not my strong suit just planing the story
And thanks for the advances I will keep that in mind
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Looks like a good start. Hope to see more soon.