Fallout Equestria story based in the frozen north. Follow Moonshine and company as they travel the frozen north, and deal with the reprocusions of the return of harmony and fantastic adventures.
8257336 Hey no problem. I cant really think of any criticism because i havent even written any stories but the only thing i can think of is to learn from your mistakes.
8270445 I admit I struggled with this concept, but it follows the lore from the actual games. And gardens cleaned the radiation and taint in the air and land, but there are still things spewing the stuff. The rivers and lakes, if you think about it would have been poluted with much more nasty stuff. Buildings and vehicles and corpes and pony waste would be disposed of via the water. It would be fine to farm with, but not so much to drink. The games didn't really delve into this topic, but for a story I felt it needed it.
Honestly these are petty gripes but I really love this fic. So I'm going to say it in case you ever do a rewrite.
After a short time, Shady just loses all hope, and picks up the fallen knife to cut me free of the offending blanket. With a few quick strokes, I was set free
I was just kind of shocked that somepony who's lived in the wasteland would be so quick to sacrifice a good blanket. Even with repairs.
Shady went and fetched a first aid kit before returning and quickly getting to work. I had never figured out how Earth ponies or Pegasai could thread a needle, but apparently Shady could.
The way this is written makes Moonshine seem like a unicorn.
This story is developing greatly.
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Again thank you. Any criticisms at all?
8257336
Hey no problem. I cant really think of any criticism because i havent even written any stories but the only thing i can think of is to learn from your mistakes.
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You got it bud
8270445
I admit I struggled with this concept, but it follows the lore from the actual games. And gardens cleaned the radiation and taint in the air and land, but there are still things spewing the stuff. The rivers and lakes, if you think about it would have been poluted with much more nasty stuff. Buildings and vehicles and corpes and pony waste would be disposed of via the water. It would be fine to farm with, but not so much to drink. The games didn't really delve into this topic, but for a story I felt it needed it.
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There is alot more going on. If you keep reading you will actually understand what is going on. There is a method behind this madness.
Honestly these are petty gripes but I really love this fic. So I'm going to say it in case you ever do a rewrite.
I was just kind of shocked that somepony who's lived in the wasteland would be so quick to sacrifice a good blanket. Even with repairs.
The way this is written makes Moonshine seem like a unicorn.
But this is only my opinion.