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fallen starr


How can I be home and still feel out of place.

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Or, she COULD have asked Twilight to teleport her to the second wedding once the first one was done, unless both were happening at the same time of day...

I like how the title makes this sound like some kind of dark adventure story.

Not that she could ask that of either of them.

Yes you can, silly pony. I mean, at least talk to them about it.

JackRipper
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An E-rated slice-of-life story called "Blood of the Covenant."

Why does this sound like it should be an M-rated horror story? :unsuresweetie:

Nice little slice of life story. It feels refreshing to see an actually smart Twilight, for this tends to be rare.

Very good story! Putting Applejack in this type of quandary is something new and I liked it. I'm sure that many of us have had similar delemas. I really loved TwilIghts response and have she helped AJ to decide. Great story about what family really means.

8207152 Teleportation from Appleloosa to Ponyville would be quite a feat.

8207159 I thought about that when I was writing it. But I decided to just leave it, since it was fitting. And I dunno, once wedding invitations have been sent out, there isn't much you can do to change it. Before, sure. But not after

8207185 good thing it's not, I don't do well with horror.

8207422 Thank you!

8207667 Yeah, somethings are just very important to her, so I was like what if...of course, you know that from my blog post. I'm very glad you liked it!

8207813

Teleportation from Appleloosa to Ponyville would be quite a feat.

New plan: Rainbow Dash, high altitude sonic rainboom to build speed, grab Applejack, book it for Appleloosa.

And I dunno, once wedding invitations have been sent out, there isn't much you can do to change it.

Yeah, but two months in advance? I mean, I've never gotten married so I don't know if that's just how it's done, but sheesh.

8209942 I like the way you think. And I mean, when both my brothers got married, they sent out invites pretty early so everyone could make plans to be there bc we have family and friends like, all over the world. Bc my family is like just as big as ajs.

A nice set up for a story, with a decent conclusion. Overall, pretty nice. :twilightsmile:

Sweet and unexpected

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no prob! it was a nice story!

Aw. Good job Twilight.
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Sweet Story. Anyhow good job! I enjoyed this. :)

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