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Onyxfire408


Hi, I'm just someone who just writes for fun. Don't expect great stories from me, or a lot of productivity. I'm also a Samurai if you've seen me at Babscon.

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With the Storm King defeated, peace and harmony had returned to the land of Equestria.

Cantorlot had been reconstructed and the storm army had gone home. Except for one. In the middle of the The element's trojan horse battle, Fluttershy had a conversation with one of the storm creatures who was crying with compassion. And he was sad to see her leave in the middle of the conversation to go rescue the princess.

However one question remained. Whatever happened to that creature? Well first his name is Borris. Borris the storm creature, and he's now staying at Fluttershy's cottage....wait what?

(I went ahead and put 'other' for Borris since the movie characters aren't in selection at the moment. This is totally unedited, so I might go back and re-edit this at some point. So expect bad english.)

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Good story. I was also wondering about this paticular Storm creature when I saw the movie. I also find it funny that the animals are all wearing sweaters.

cute story found these for you.

“Borris made this, show him Borris.” [ her ]
Harry the Bear was wearing a large blue sweater with a picture of a honey bey’s nest on it.
[ bee's ]
Borris took his hoof with his hand and stood up [ her]

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Well I did warn you in the beginning. I'll fix it later though, thanks lad.

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Alright, found a bit of time to fix them lad. Thanks again, 'pretiate it. Cheers

Is Discord going to get a sweater next?

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Y'know I actually did think about Discord, like if he was gonna get a sweater. But then I remembered. He had no part in the movie...so I decide to not put him in the story. Don't get me wrong, I would have, and I really like Discord. But I was like...."mmmmmm nah." Don't ask why.

Awww...he's adorable.:raritystarry: Now I might as well call him Boris from now on.

However, one little thing I would like to point out that bothered me. I don't know if you read the prequel comic, but there it was actually showed that the Storm King was surprisingly nice to his minions as long as they were useful to him, even planning parties and stuff for them to keep them loyal. Sure, it was all an act, and he didn't really care about them, but it still kinda clashes with how he's mentioned to handle things in this story.

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Oh yea I'm aware of the prequel comic. I'm also aware that some of the storm creature are actually capable of speech. I just didn't care because I might as well make up some sort of back story just to make Borris more lovable. Which worked. But hey, that's your opinion. I'm cool with it lad.

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