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W-cup? ......Shit~. What about Applejack?
8776725
I think the author meant E, but mistyped.
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8776725
Nope. I meant W.
I never mistype W for E; that's an important survival skill that is!
8777048
That, is really big. As in, absurd Hentai big. I'm fine with it, I love this sort of thing, but, it's quite the contrast between C cup Scootaloo and B cup Sweetie. I mean, yes, Earth Ponies are usually depicted as the one with the largest chests in anthro, but, that's real big.
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To be fair (to Apple Bloom's spine), Sweetie Belle is probably exaggerating here. Going by the '1 cup size letter = 1" from chest' standard*, 'W' would be almost TWO FEET from her rib cage.
Somewhat unlikely and almost a disability if its accurate. The one picture I've drawn of this anthro Apple Bloom is more like 'hanging to navel in a bra'. Comically large, but still allowing, you know, movement.
Sort of.
*No idea how closely this is adhered to in specialty boutique bra sizes.
8777072
Ah, OK that's fair. This was a fun read. It's just Sweetie having fun, she's made it clear she wants it, nobody goes too far, it was solid clopfic.
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Thank you! I do my best!!!
8777105
So, again. What about AJ?
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LOL. She’s in the same range. I’m kind of liking this anthro thing; I might write a story with AJ in it. No promises; my backlog is colossal.
Still, AJ and AB sharing some big stud like Shiny or Mac would be epic.
8777218
Sounds like a great idea.
...Marry me?
Best chapter title ever.
ADORABLE, and comedy gold! I ship it.
So. Fuggin'. Hawt. I need this in my life. I heart Featherweight sooo much; I hope he gets to taste Pipsqueak's cum sometime!!
OMG CUTE.
Good kids!!
Oh as if Rarity's not into butt stuff.
PJs and BJs!!!
Tender Taps is also a good bean! I love how AB has to literally tell him to facefuck Sweetie and that it'll be okay because he's so nervous and shy about messing their relationships up! And I SO FEEL Sweetie's feels about sex making you feel lonely!!
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Hey, hooves off! I found him first!
. . . Oh, also, the good Captain's wife of fifteen years beat both of us to it.
8777897
Taken sorry!
Oh, but yeah, I mean, sometimes you really just want to read tons and tons of sex? Its hard to do because I like there to be at least a little character stuff in there. But I'm working towards it! This story is a big success in that regard.
8778525
Clerk's reference!
Description says teenager.
Cover art says baby boomer.
8778636
Ha ha ha ha ha wait I don't get it.
8778744
I was saying she looks old, like, mid 40s and desperately trying to be 20
8778747
Just like me!
That would be Gen X though get your generations straight.
8778747
Wait though seriously this might actually be useful feedback, since I DID draw the cover art. What specific aspects of it are saying midlife crisis to you?
Not bad.
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Somepony
wide as
But she bet the
his dick
You too? (???)
thrusting
Not bad. Gonna be honest though, I skimmed like half of it.
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LOL four proofreaders, and still, MISTAKES! I take all blame. I'll fix 'em when I get a chance. Thx.
It's TOP, though, not to, as in 'Top: To take the active roll in anal sex'.
The more you know.
8778864
Its kind'a long.
8778880
Yeah, that's why I added the question marks. I figured it'd be easier to just point it out in case it was an error.
And don't feel bad. This may sound like bragging, but I'm not tryna brag, I just have never met anyone on this site who was as good at editing and proofreading as I am. I've definitely read other stories where I found errors even through a few prereaders.
8778881
Naw, I was talking about the second chapter itself. Which is weird because 3.5k words really isn't that long heh..
8778894
You can't blame my crew; I am a perfect storm of typographical errors. When you throw that level of mess at a bunch of people and give them a week to sort through it, there's gonna be some stuff they miss.
8778914
Oh no, definitely. I was just stroking my ego for a bit.
8778532
I feel that. To quote From Dusk Till Dawn 2 (and this is the only reason to quote that movie): "When I care more about the characters, I care more about the fucking."
But some times, you do just want thousands upon thousands words of hot sexual goodness.
8778525
That BITCH!
8779183
SRSLY.
8778759
Over tuned facial features, the stance, the not really small but not quite wide enough breasts, the shading, and the clothing seeming a bit odd.
Gosssh... First Base was the luckiest one, I think. He's got a very special treatment.
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Special indeed "Rim job to orgasm" is... pretty much a physically impossible sex act? IDK; I'm not about to go looking for that on Pornhub. Anything involving anal on there and you get stuff you can never forget, ever, no matter hard you try.
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I mean, Rumble, First Base, Shady, Button, Tender Taps were the obvious choices . 
And it's actually funny how marginal role Button Mash had in this. 
By the way, I like that you included pretty much all the cutest colts.
Carrot Crunch and Chip Mint... I wasn't familiar with those, but after checking those names in the images I got reminded of Carrot Crunch.
Skeedaddle and that brown unicorn colt with Twilight-like mane from ''Marks and Recreation'' are pretty cute colts too, tho, they weren't in this.
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I mean, okay, fair enough.
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I literally just went down the 'list of colts' on the wiki until I had enough. :D Pipsqueak and Featherweight at the likeliest to get a spinoff story. I identify with Featherweight!
Woulda loved to see the stallion swallow his own jizz
8907710
You're going to like my back-catalogue then.
Hawt.
Mmm! That sounds hot! I'd love it if you did a story on that!
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It would wouldn’t it!
9119569 So do it! I'd love to read some ass-eating action between the three of them! Please and thank you!
Gotta admit, the absolute only thing I didn't like about this entire story was the W cup breasts. I think H is my limit. That is the most minor of nitpicks though, and didn't take away from the story. Every second of this had me ready to blow (and I kind of had to take a few breaks during). i love how the story sets up a way for things to go on long after the last few words. With Bloom getting a nice guy she can be happy with and Sweetie getting all the dick she wants while being with someone important to her, and most importantly, they all stay friends. It sounds cheesy out loud but that's really the important thing. I love your writing style and can't wait to read more!
Really felt like ponies in name only.
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PINO?
So, the first chapter has female on male rimming, then the next one has female on male nipple sucking.
Geez, man. Your clops are freakin' lewd!
unf™
Oh I love this one. Consensual sluttery at its finest.