Completely uncertain as to why I'm suddenly so obsessed with this fandom...
Dinky is having a bad day. Mean fillies have started teasing her and telling lies about her family. She runs home in tears to find her mother still at work and her sister gone, but her grandmother is there, and soothes her tears and comforts her. Sometimes a good hug and a muffin can work wonders.
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Hello, Marefriend here. This is not my first fanfiction, but definitely my first foray into MLP fandom.
I don't currently have a beta reader, so all editing mistakes are mine and mine alone, but don't be afraid to point them out if you see them. I need all the help I can get.
Um, this should run to no more than three or four chapters. Hope you all like it.
definantly gonna give this a quick read. then decide wether I like it or not.
Pardon me, my good writer. But you appear to have written an excellent beginning. Might I suggest keeping up the good work, whilst I track your story with interest?
loved it. spotted just a few mistakes, but they're fine. really enjoyed reading this.
Wait, so Ditzy is Dinky's grandma and Derpy is her mom? Or... that confuses me.
Great story. Tracked.
If you still need a beta reader, I'd be glad to proofread and edit and such. I've noticed you have above-average skier irony skill, at least for this site.
A wonderful opening! It's always nice to see a warm and loving Derpy/Ditzy story
I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Say it with me, now, 3...2...1... D'AWWWWWW
D'awwwwww.
My heart, she is confused. She knows not whether to cry in sadness or in joy, for the loving sweetness of the derpy hooves familia knows no bounds! Thank señorita, thank you for this glorious fanfiction. I go now.
Wow this story is really great! I loved every part of it and it was nothing short of amazing. Please continue to make more my friend, as these stories are SO AWESOME
lol.
Oh, that was absolutely brilliant! I loved how real you made them feel, it's hard to find a good bulling story that isn't entirely angst. I especially enjoyed the cliffie at the end. I'm guessing Daring Do's the grandmom?
And then Diamond Tiara suddenly died... horribly and painfully... wait what? Oh yeah I loved this story... I love Dinky, and Ditzy, and Sparkler... and now I love Granny Doo. The whole story was fun to read even if you did reveal my secret muffin recipe to the world. Great job I'll be happy to read more of your stuff.
Even though it's been some time...do you think you'll ever do another chapter? I'd love to have Derpy come home and be with her family.