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sequel?
I liked the hypnosis part. It was all pretty good. Maybe a little more description of the characters. I wanted a part where he penetrate her and maybe may the crowd go wild to.
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Not Likely, but never say never!
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Thanks, This all felt a bit flat in my opinion, maybe adding those parts you mentioned would have made it better.
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Make a (cut scene) or edit the one you have.
She was none the wiser...
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It just seems so familiar!😂Poor Songbird
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She’ll be okay
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You're right, she usually gets over it pretty quickly. xD
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!!! Really easy going if I do say so myself
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As she shown when Twilight accidentally threw cake frosting on her suit
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Chill Af, of course.
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Eeyup
Down vote
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Cool, Any particular reason why? ^_^
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No not really.
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😂😂 That's okay, Thanks for rating it! ^_^
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Oh you want me to rate it?
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Well I assume you hit the Red Thumb if you commented 'Down Vote'. If you haven't already then go ahead. ^_^
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hahahahaha no I don't use that button . I just like to buck with the fanbois LOL.
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That's cool, Hope your day is going well then :D
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Lol this guy has been on a few other stories just generally being a toxic asshole. Idk why he doesn't just move on but whatever
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SHIT HE GOT ME
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/822271/i-am-the-featured-box-troll
KEEP DOING GODS WORK SOLDIER
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Because of ponies like you little one.
Well, this does seem like the kind of asshole thing Discord would do. Really should have left him stoned.
Nope - Don't like it. The biggest problem for me is that I've always viewed the Lord of Chaos as being more playful than destructive, especially since his rehabilitation and obvious concern for Fluttershy. Here, he's protrayed as a stalker, a manipulator and a rapist. It doesn't matter that no one remembers, since it obviously happened. That kind of character de-construction seems to be in vogue now and it does not make a good story.
Solution: End the story with Fluttershy waking up, looking at Discord who is cuddling with her, post clopping, and saying something about having a strange dream. After all, with her secret desire to sing in public (as seen in Filli Vanilli) it wouldn't be a stretch to imagine her dreaming of being as famous as Songbird and it would tie in beautifully to current continunity without the character de-construction.
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Agreed entirely.
Awesome writing! Hope to see more like this from you in the future.
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What is your problem
Nice. There isn't enough male-on-female hypnotism out there. For some reason, all the good stuff seems to be femslash. Which isn't bad, but...
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Fans take all comment way to serious and get (as much as I hate to say it) butt hurt over a snide comment.
Pretty great story, hope to see a sequel
Oh my
Hmm..
Discord is a very naughty naughty boy. Well written