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Being the ruler of a nation makes it difficult to make friends, have relationships or even enjoy a casual fling.

Celestia is intent on changing this.

Spoiler alert: She fails.


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We need to see that spell in action.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Oh and the fic was a fun bit of fluff.

Very nicely done.

~Skeeter The Lurker

It's so weird to see Chrysalis and Celestia interacting so casually. Especially when I'm working on a fic right now where the changelings are at war with Equestria. But you did a fantastic job of it.

Sometimes the best friend someone can have is their mortal enemy.

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Funny how that works isn't it? 'tis a fact that love and hatred are much more closely related than one might think.

In any case, I do believe I'd like to see more of this in the future. This has potential.

Best frienemies

Well I expected that kind of Fic and it was good

Loved it! It was funny and very Interesting. Great work!

Comment posted by mikecari deleted Apr 21st, 2019

This was hilarious love the comedy here

Chrissy said what was on our minds :rainbowlaugh:

Honestly? I can only imagine those two becoming freenemies after this one, with Chrysalis coming up with increasingly ludicrous plans just to meet up and chat, culminating with her being a bridesmaid on Celly and Twiggles' marriage, as Celestia's best mare (Luna will be Twilight's, for this will pass a couple centuries into the future, because Twilight).
Oh, and with a convoluted plan involving replacement shenanigans to allow for a greater honeymoon, of course! :rainbowwild:

Celestia bit back the urge to remark on the young pony’s attitude and smiled instead. “I would like a cup of Da Hong Pao, served with exactly two scones and a spoonful of honey please.”

Flawless cover, Sunbutt.

So, how about this blue bombers, eh?

In the year 200X...

In all, enjoyable, lighthearted fun. And let's face it, Twilight's having a great evening herself. This could use a good proofreading pass, but overall it was a fun read. Thank you for it.

Comment posted by LightningStrike34 deleted Dec 24th, 2020
Comment posted by LightningStrike34 deleted Dec 24th, 2020

Quite amusing, though it maybe could have used another editing pass, since it had a number of minor typos such as "Mopping" when you wanted "Moping." (The first one is cleaning the floor with a mop, the second is brooding).

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