This story is a sequel to Daring Do and the Hand of Doom
A story of the first seven months of the life of Penumbra Heartbreak, the alicorn daughter of King Sombra.
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Unwhole Hole
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Unwhole Hole
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Good to see you back.
Ooh, looking forward to reading this tomorrow.
EDIT: After I read the original story.
I'm very excited to see where this goes.
This is getting really good.
I love the way this chapter was written. Very unique.
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*looks back at Hand of Doom*
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Glimmy wat u doin'?
Huh...
If they had any inkling that this sort of propaganda had been spread, it perfectly explains why Tia and Lulu didn't go to the Empire themselves when it reappeared. They would have feared sending the populace into a blind panic.
smol robutt frend?
I believe this is the first interpretation I've seen where Nightmare Moon remained an ally to Celestia for a time. It's an interesting idea. Wonder how long it's been and how long it lasts.
dis guy. da real MVP.
Iiiiinteresting. I need to ponder that for a while.
Aha, so it was Mistmane. Aaand she exists again, in the 'present'...good times, good times.
Is it wrong that I really love Gxurab/Flock and want to give him all the headpats? Like having a really angry, angsty weasel for a pet.
Huh...I wonder if Penumbra smelled the poisons when she was revolted by the juice, or really doesn't know what's good. Alicorn snoot > crystal poner snoot?
Wait, wait, wait, so 'Holder', as in Holder's Boulder...yeah, clearly now. WTF tho.
Man, Holder was spot-on calling her a teenager.
Rebellious phase, GO!
GO TO HELL, DAD! I HATE YOU, MOM!
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Oh boy, friends! She can have her own little rebellious teenage goth posse!
This is amazing and I love them all.
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(possibly literally, depending on how much attention 'Thirteen' is paying to all this)
This is my favourite chapter so far. I know you wrote in your blog not much people read your stories, but I thought this and the prequel was really engaging. Not much stories manage to hook me for 141k words so far, so hope you don't get demotivated despite the low views.
I image Hope being probably the "cutest" zombie Necrophilo has ever created, happily waving back and smiling.
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It was really hard to find a goth Cadance, so here's an edit of https://derpibooru.org/856765
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In case it doesn't work: https://i.imgur.com/fagcSVY.png
Don't recall if the horn was ever dyed in the fic however.
The betrayal!
Now that's unexpected.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
Due to this, and his name being Twilight, I guess you can say he's going Twilynanas. 🍌
Nerd Celestia and her adorable guards.
I'm curious how many Questlords has gone rogue/quit over the years by the time of "Hand of Doom".
Oh hai, Flock.
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I am on the edge of my seat.
1. I'm curious if Necrophilo 's gem can transfer hosts over and over like Scarlet Mist's mask now.
2. Can't wait for Luciferian to embrace the demon. Maybe.
Well that's...interesting. The history of this world grows ever more baffling.
Cool song.
That's beautiful. I have no idea how to express myself, so I'll instead post a picture of Penumbra (probably got it wrong, sorry) edited from here:
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saccharine af and I love it
Now I'm picturing Flurry Heart as a child in the far future playing toys with the Nameless One, much to the horror of the other staff.
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New golem who dis?
I suppose we know which side ultimately wins, but this could easily be a complete trainwreck for both.
Does the steward look something like this by any chance?
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Let me say that before I read this story ,that because I know Celestia's back story in this universe, that I hope that she dies and gets what's coming to her. I know that this is set in the past but I can always hope.
So hard to find good help these days.
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What. I don't remember reading about Celestia much in "Hand of Doom". What chapter was that?
With regard to the war chapters, I'm curious how it'll go given I'm pretty sure they used nukes a while back + Holder. I eagerly await what happens.
The evilest of bromances.
And that's when she decided to start the branch of Precision Necromancy using Love.
She's such a charmer.
This was an amazing chapter, this and the previous. Incredibly disturbing, but really excellent.
Teleporting dangerous things away is actually quite clever. Despite being an "obvious" use case of it, I did not expect that. Good job.
[intensity intensifies]
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Ehh...not so much teleporting as stamping "Return to Sender"...
o he ded
I like that Sombra and the Field Marshall's complete disregard for their own infrastructure and people (other than the crystal ponies required for their fear) explains why the Crystal "Empire" that returns in canon is nothing but a modest city. Everything else is long-buried debris, reclaimed by Hyperborea.