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Think you're missing a 'to' between 'the path' and 'his way'.
The opening scene between Wile and Lemony speaking couldn't help me think about how well this story handles character dialogue. And by character dialogue, I more specifically mean 'when characters talk about their ideas about life to another pony' dialogue that often I roll my eyes at because it gives off an air of a writer copying and pasting text from some philosophy book and dumping them into their characters to make them nothing more than talking heads for some idea.
But here... I really like it. Not just because it's short and to the point, but also because what Wile and Lemony say to one another informs me as a reader who these characters are. Like I know the way Wile talks about how she thinks of stuff informs me that she's a laid back mare, while whenever Lemony speaks of her ideas it informs me of how she's a sweet, but not naive, mare who's curious about the outside world, dangers be damned.
Encountering Nature's Call again was nice, and seeing Wile holding back on being casual towards her really shows just how much Nature's Call is a character you don't mess with. Keats introduction was handled really well, presenting him as this imposing yet gentle figure. I also feel like I'm starting to figure out why this story is called 'To Scorn the Earth.'