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The Canterlot Castle Gardens are home to some of the most incredible statues in Equestria. They range in subject from great minds of magic such as Starswirl the Bearded to a group of ponies renowned for being the bearers of the Elements of Harmony. Of course, every rose has its thorn, and this garden’s most deadly thorn was the stone prison of Discord, a powerful being whose chaotically twisted sense of humor was matched in unusualness by his equally chaotic form, a mix-match of different races. Discord was a terrifyingly sinister tyrant feared and despised by all. All, that is, except a similarly socially outcast soul, Princess Luna.

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Comments ( 57 )

Insta fav, here we go!

Chotic love? (Spelled that wrong) and a Luna/Discord romance fic? 100% down! LET'S DO THIS! I cant wait to read more of this very well thought of and extremly crafted story, I'm liking this pairng although Luna seems a bit more of a tomcolt to me...I like her like that, but nonetheless you know for a fact I'll be reading, reviewing and watching your stories with glee...also hoping you like my own MLP: Fim stories thart I have written so far.

Hoping to also see Derpy for some reason, as always.....ALL HAIL DERPY!!!! Peace, Rox.

So I made some thoughts about dat title thing.
Spoiler right away the quiet obvious? May you call it 'Breaking the curse. Again.' or 'Another power of friendship'.
-> Discord becomes free by Lunas efforts, Lunas friendship, his feelings, duh!

But maybe you don't wanna spoil anything by the chapter-name. 'Heart beats' (a bit kitschy, if you ask me).
-> One point of this is his raising love, of course. The other is Discords heart itself, which can beat again after becoming petrified for a while.

Another kitchy title would be 'Melting stone'. Okay, that's too kitchy. :pinkiesick:

Or choose the life of a thief. Let's steal the title 'Happiness Loves Company' by the famous band RHCP!
-> Luna, happiness, love, company, Discord, moar friends..wee!

An easy one would also be 'Experiments' since the whole happening of this chapter is based on Lunas experiments with whatever-magics. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png

..I know these aren't the bests of all time, but meh. Maybe it helps you.

AWWWWW YEAH.

LUNACORD.

:yay:

I enjoyed the little details in this chapter like Luna being allergic to bananas, getting crappy birthday gifts, and her hobbies. I enjoyed Discord tearing into Celestia. You don't see much Luna shipping that isn't with Twilight, a random guard or Celestia or any combination of the three. Discord is too often paired with Pinkie or Celestia.

I think the only issue with this pairing is that it doesn't have a good sounding ship name: Duna :rainbowhuh:or Discuna :facehoof: or Lunacord :raritydespair:or Liscord (Okay this one sounds alright.):pinkiesmile:

1230734 I love Luna and Discord is my one of my favorite villains, seconded only by Disney's Chernabog, so I did what I thought would be fun.

And you're right, it could take some effort to find a really good ship name for this pair.

Personally I am a huge fan of LunaCord so this story easily tickles my fancy, and it really doesn't disappoint! Also, I adore that Discord got to stick it to Celestia like that, twas simply amazing! GO DISCORD, bring forth the chaotic romance!

Shall I start with my comment for the new chapter or the happy-dance? May I try both :rainbowlaugh:
Okay, that doesn't work. So here's my comment:

I have to admit, that I didn't had many collisions with that shipping, yet. And when I did, it was only a sidekick from a escapade. You know, like DiscordxCelestia, adding some betrayal by giving DiscordxLuna a shot. But seeing DiscordxLuna in the main-role is something that's rather new. And rather new is always good! It's even better, if it's done good. Just as in this case. Wee!
The pairing deserves this. Since they are both pariahs somehow, the matching is quiet believable. They don't only have a violent history, but also both aren't the greatest socialers (if that's not a word, I mean by that both aren't really used to social rules and stuff.). For me, the second point is the biggest reason why this has the great potential it has. They both don't follow the common ways of interacting, and so this could easily escalate here and there, forming a really intense relationship, fluctuating between 'melting hot' and 'icy'. One could nearly say, that this is radiating twilight. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png

Also, if that's only the start, then Celestia is really fucked. Luna's 'd'aww'-ing skills are too damn high, and Discord's ability to hit critical spots with his words could become really terrifying in some ways.

So, what were I doing? Aha!
Vote for a sequel. Get the vote passed. CHECK
Author doesn't write it for a long time. Releases a seperated fic instead. CHECK
Help her with finding a name or something for it. CHECK
Get not thanked in a comment, but in 'Author's notes'. CHECK
...initiating happy-dance deluxe...
(Seriously, everything for a writing pegasister :pinkiehappy: )

1235277 :rainbowkiss: Man I love getting those extra long reviews and comments!

So sorry for making you wait so long... :fluttercry:

You have nothing to fear, this is a strictly Discord x Luna story. I refuse to let either even try to get romantic with with anypony else for evena chapter. :rainbowdetermined2:

And just wait for the dates and interference. :trollestia:

1235992 Ha, Pinkie Pie wrote a book? I wanna read that....and damn, Celstria just got verbally beaten up, really nice job. Eveyone puts her as being perfect and the good pony. Me? I perfer to put her as either an immortal goddess or the villian...at the least, an anti-hero, same with Luna or Discord, and I vote Liscord for the win!

You keep improving and no matter what you say, how you word it or what your going through, we got your back Rox, always....granted your funny as buck and Luna for some reason does seem a bit OCC but hey, it's a bit hard to give her a personilty.

I love this and like always, there is not a chapter that you can write that I won't review, and nice two Pinkie Pie refence...also, can you teach me how to write so....proffisnal? (Spelled that wrong, I know...but I can't spell, thats the thing)

1243279 Oh? You caught Pinkie's book? :twilightsmile:

And I believe you meant professional :trollestia:

1244079 Yes I have. P. D. Pie LOL, I have to read that.

And I knew it! Mind helping a fellow MLP fan out?

1244258 Er... I don't really know how to teach someone to write like me... But I guess I could like review your stuff before you post it or something. :twilightsheepish:

1245171 Ah...like an editor, and it would be a very large honor to have a famous author like you do that for me, but seriously it's a waste of your time and talent, my fics are not anywhere near your talent, you may even find them to be annoying and stupid as buck....just saying.

1245251 :twilightblush: I'm not famous, really, there are a lot of other authors who are way more famous

1245330 True but you are still in the high ranked list, and if you really wish to help then may I ask you look over my stories, review and then if you want to proof-read it I'll hoof or in my case claw it over:rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::derpytongue2:...to be honest, I'm not great whatsoever with grammer and spelling and I know I still got a few errors in my stories, if you want that is I know your very busy.

I can't help but feel completely torn about these two chapters thus far. If you recall, I'm the last one to beg for a sequel before you agreed. So far, while I've liked moments, I feel Discord has been a little too.... submissive? Not sure what the right word is. Maybe I just don't like thinking of Discord as nervous or weak, and that may be the reason i feel torn on the sequel so far.

Him leaving on this hands upside-down for no reason, bam! That made me smile. Discord's 'modest' list of his qualities had me in stitches. Also, I loved your ABC list of discord's guttural expulsions, but you forgot 'Y'. Or perhaps you're saving that Y word for later.

That being said; I do look forward to Discord's idea of romance: a lovely bouquet of poison joke, with a candle lit dinner where the candles melt from the bottom up, and a dessert of pineapple upside-down cake turned right-side up. Oh the possibilities! :rainbowkiss:

Anyway, while not favorited yet like your last story, I'm definitely track this, and give it a like. I look forward to see how it progresses. Also, thanks for going through with the sequel. :twilightsmile:

1262067 OH HB, I love to make my fans happy, I couldn't not give you a sequeal after you all begged for it :pinkiehappy:

*reads back through your comment*

"Y"? I put yo-yo down, didn't I? :rainbowhuh:

*reads the chapter again*

:facehoof: Not. A. Word. Understand?

1262067 And by the power vested in me by the authority of my awesomeness, I will make you Favorite this story if it's one of the many thing I do in the near future! :twilightangry2:

Golly, I love my fans :twilightsmile:

...Who is it?! Tell me! Tell Auntie Pinkie Pie before I drown you in a sea of frosting!...

:rainbowlaugh: Discord is over 4,000 older than her.

Great chapter, it's funny watching Celestia get maimed. She's gonna be pissed when it turns out to be some kind of fair or elaborate party.

On a sad note: The Miami Dolphins lost by three GOD DAMN points in overtime against the fucking Jets. :twilightangry2:

.... and Discord turns out to be the most sane character in the chapter besides Twilight.

wat?

Am I the only person who actually doesn't like Minecraft? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
Anyways, how could Fluttershy come in handy here? Flowers? Too common. Ow, I can see a big escalation at the horizon..

HOLY BUCK! Poor Scootaloo, she just got zapped away for trying to find her Cutie Mark...damn, the Princess is a bitch in this story but I was laughing my ass off when I read she got a door slammed into her face twice...talk about seriously painful, and how the hell is one vomit all proper like?

Shit, Spike is always one to get targeted or blackmailed so easily...poor Spike, it does not even have tobe about Rarity either. ad Piknie Pie is a beast!!!!:yay: Love it, the fact that a god was scard of her had me dying from laughter, I really love the humor you put into this story and I see nothing wrong with Discord/Pnkie Pie romance pairing, I like it to be honest...onto the next one! And yes, Celstria's flank is huge....more cusion for the pushing:raritywink: :rainbowlaugh:

Ha!

Banishment...

Poor Scootaloo.
Do you have something against her?

SOOOO CUTEEEE



Though one thing.... ''The alicorn looked up at him with those deep emerald eyes''
Her Eyes are Blue :trollestia:

:pinkiecrazy: i was thinking of cupcakes :rainbowlaugh:
And i love this so much And poor scoots she did nothing :scootangel: (celsestia is just a big troll :trollestia: ) I cant wait to read mare

2976317 If only there were luna, discord, wrathful celestia, and nightmare moon emoticons.

A guillotine? I'll admit, I didn't see that coming.
Also, you turned MLP into Tom and Jerry. kudos.

Oh Gods, you are a GENUIS with humor, I laughed so bucking hard, I love it. I notice the small bit of Rainbow Dash and Rarity with her wings when Celestia was sailing through the sky, immortals have all the fun:twilightangry2: I'm sorry it took me so long to get at this, been a while since I been on this site, I freaking love it all, Celestia being so over protective is just funny as hell...NEXT:rainbowlaugh:

Word cannot explain how much I think this is awesome. No. Words.

“Gurgle!” Discord gurgled.

Quite so.

..Celestia is gonna cause Nightmare Moon with her actions..isn't she.

Oh Celestia, you're so stupid I'm shocked that Equestria has lasted so long.:facehoof:

Discord verbally bodyslamming Celestia made me laugh... loudly. My cat is displeased with this, but she can deal. :D

I hope this continues. Last modification was as of last year August, I'm greatly horrified by this! Please continue! At least place a canceled if thou aren't going to continue. :pinkiesad2:

None have struck as much fear as the thought of you pressing the button of ultimate destruction of this amazing fanfic. Pressing that ca- That just sends shivers down and up my spine! Let it be known that if this does not continue, I have suffered a fate worse than Tartarus' worst! :twistnerd:

MOAAR PLEASEE!!! :flutterrage: I LOVE THIS STORYY!!

CRASH!
Celestia was thrown off of her feet and through the wall behind her by an invisible wave of force. Discord was on her in an instant, his face a hair’s breadth from her own.
“Listen and listen well you pompous pony… I would never treat Luna like a game. She is so much more to me than that, and if you try to take her away from me, I will not hesitate to destroy you piece by piece with my bare claws.

This reminds me of something...

Also...MORE! :applecry: please...?

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