Good story. I was a little concerned at first that their bdsm relationship was going to really delve into the hardcore and even extreme level, but it was good to see it dipped a toe into the hardcore.

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I'm glad you liked it!

I'm not sure why this has so many dislikes, your story is fine to me. My only criticism is that the chapters seem awkwardly spread out, but that's all i got.

Also i lol'd so much at

Fluttershy gasped loudly "Ah! Oh Applejack, you bitch! I love you!"

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I'm glad you liked it! My chapters do seem a little awkward I admit, but that's just the way I structure them unfortunately!

I'm not going to lie, I'm a pretty hardcore maso myself, but I've never considered branding outside of marriage.