- Member Since 8th Oct, 2020
- offline last seen 9 hours ago
Nighthawk alpha bravo
Readers are Oscar Mike
Nighthawk alpha bravo
Joined 8th Oct, 2020 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Gallants · 9.8k words · 17 2 · 710 views
- The Wingman · 16k words · 82 6 · 1.7k views
- Anaylze · 74k words · 61 9 · 2.1k views
- The Loner · 36k words · 46 12 · 1.3k views
- Filthy-Casual · 29k words · 61 11 · 1.4k views
- Nemesis Sol · 11k words · 43 4 · 2.1k views
- BMIR · 20k words · 45 4 · 787 views
- Tower of 0 · 10k words · 40 8 · 2.2k views
Featured In1
Stats
Page generated in 0.172 seconds
Total duration
622 users online
1,134,281 hits today, 2,658,435 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
GET TO THE CHOPPA
Seems promising looking foward to more :)
I cant wait to see more im excited 😆
10919551
If I’m in the mood, I might update this weekly
Nice chapter.
Simple yet good start and looks interesting. Looking forward to next chapter
Awesome chapter dude
10924259
Thank you, if you want to talk about stuff, I’m always open for discussion on my blogs, they will help you understand a lot of stuff
this is really good! thanks for such a great story.
The duo sound very incompetent
Rangers lead the way keep up the story you're doing a good job please let one of them one adopt Scootaloo
I don't... i don't know how I'm supposed too feel about this story. It's very simplistic and to be honest very predictable. Characters express things they don't know and other characters except things they don't know without any explanation to keep the story moving along. Also these warrant officer act like they are teenagers LARPing as army warrant officer. Don't get me wrong it's not...bad just far from good.
My rofter copter go’s swho swho
Bro I would e pissed I would rather die as a soldier than have the sun whore talk to me ( ps your story is amazing I just don’t like the ponies except from a few and if you think about how they get rid of threats it’s pretty fucked in the head and illegal in real life
10944670
Creature not following MY rules? Get rid of it
10950530
So are you saying I made a mistake? I’m not following you, not following following, Your comment is rather vague
10933099
Sorry if it isn’t your exact cup of tea, i do try to improve my writing skills after a few chapters, this is just how I write.
Up next, the rotor blades decides they want to leave and the heli falls out the sky
We need some use Army Rangers rangers lead the way
Well that was a really good chapter.
11015508
Totally agree with you on that
11022540
I’ll see what I can do, but it will have to be a little while into the story, I’m sure you all want to see a new recruits get yelled at by the marine.
*wheezing intensifies*
Barney
11052261
Take a look at it again, I changed the colors to look like the dark and light side of the moon, I got rid of the previous version so I had to remake it.
Gum what's your sole purpose in this Army to do whatever you tell me drill sergeant god dammit gum that's the most standing into ever heard you must have iq160 you are God damn get the private gum
11052263
I love you you love me
11059034
We're a happy family! That was my childhood my dude.
It's a bit rushed but overall I live the premise.
helikopter helikopter
IT LIVES!!!!
Ah fuck, come on! I fuckin hate this bullshit trope, where being in heat gives the mare's an excuse to terrorize and commit rape against stallions....... Can't fucking stand it, at all
Please let one of be a father figures Spike
Why is that?
11140677
This your first time reading this story, because there is some profanity, because in the military, they are known to cuss in intense situations or sometimes even normal situations. If you’ve watched some action movies, you might hear some profanity here and there, I hope that answered the question.
11140638
I just decided to rewrite that section and take it out, I was desperate and trying to figure out what to write after having a major writer’s block.
Then why is this story longer?
11167582
11167582
It is longer because I didn’t know how popular it would get, I just go back and forth writing stories, I like to be kept busy.
Left out quotation marks at those two sentences.. Just thought I would try to help out.
Im liking the story so far, I wonder where this will go.
11174198
Nice catch, I’ll deal with that right now, I don’t know if you noticed but this is on pause for the moment, I’m working on somewhat rewriting my other story.
I missed those quotations because I had to catch my plane to Orlando Florida.
for a first chapter this is the best thing so far.
'we're off to see the wizard, the wonderful wizard of oz'
'follow the yellow brick road, follow the yellow brick road'
and now you all have it stuck in your head with me :D