Twin Moon

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Chrome Masquerade

Chrome Masquerade #1 · Oct 12th, 2021 · 1 · ·

What he didn’t see was that Luna had started to secretly weave her own magic into the fabric of the jacket. Luna felt nothing but excitement at the deception that she was creating. A high noble, one of the two monarchs of the great Kingdom of Equestria, doing something so scandalous. It was unheard of!

I'mma stop you right there. It would only be a 'monarchy' if there was only one ruler. Just saying.

Mortefleur

Mortefleur #2 · Oct 12th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Noice

ChaosVA757

ChaosVA757 #3 · Oct 12th, 2021 · 1 · ·

This ending has is a great point to start another chapter or a continuation of this story

StabbymcKnife

StabbymcKnife #4 · Oct 13th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Ahh Celly you have no idea what Lulu has wrought upon the world. Two Lunas, that's a recipe for winning every prank war.

Greenhorn

Greenhorn #5 · Oct 21st, 2021 · 3 · ·

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I kinda expect something like this...

Celestia: Why in Equestria did you think this is a good idea, Luna?
Luna#1: Well, dear sister, we just tried to congratulate our subject's happiest time. Moreover, nopony got hurt!
Luna#2: We agree, and think about the benefit we now have...
Celestia: What are you talking about?
Luna#1: Think about it sister. Now that there are two of us, we can share the load of our duties and might be even able to get time off once in a while.
Luna#2: Exactly!
Celestia: ... can I see the spells you used?

Proper-Noun

Proper-Noun #6 · Oct 27th, 2021 · · ·

Will there be a sequel? I really want to see this continued!

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #7 · Nov 1st, 2021 · 3 · ·

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Correct. It would be a diarchy. And strictly speaking Equestria is a Principality as it is ruled over by princes and princesses, not kings and queens.

Track120

Track120 #8 · Aug 30th, 2022 · · ·

Luna didn't not spare any further time. She immediately ushered a stunned Starfire through the front door, leaving the guards behind in the process.

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #9 · 1 week ago · · ·

At this time of night there were only a few people left awake.
Luna was usually inundated with thousands of parchments, letters, gifts,(—— and various other things.
Up close he could admire the artisan stitching that had been used to detail it, or the soft feeling of the high-class silk fibre that it was made from.
She used to her magic to tug the front of the panties up all the way, finally concealing his sheath from sight.
The two Lunas turned to face her with the same characteristic tilt of their head, they then spoke in perfect unison, “Good morning Sister of ours.”
“We simply wish to enjoy this fine meal with you.”

So is there a sequel planned? That ending seems like there is.

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