First. Nice. Second. I would like a side story of abe or Scarlet. I wish to see the every day workings of this island and all the fucked up people in it. Third. If you do make a side story of the inslads local residences I would like to be one of them.
If you don't know, Abe will actually be appearing in my other stories, which technically makes all my stories side stories of each other. And yes since Abe is technically an eldritch god 'he' will actually be on all of them(although he will have different names and different forms. You don't expect an eldritch god to just have a pony form do you) and not just like different stories with same characters 'he' will actually be there. It pays having a character that has access to multiversal travel wouldn't you say so. Oh and Scarlet will also show up in my other stories as well, although a little different. In this story, Cadence will actually not only be studying Shining and Twi but Also Abe and Scarly and some other people in the village.
I wish to see the every day workings of this island
First of all yes you will get to see that. Second of all who said it's an island? Like in chapter two it is specified that BlackFlag village is just an anarchist village hidden in the middle of a forest two or three hours away from Ponyville. I don't know where you got the impression this is an island.
If you do make a side story of the inslads local residences I would like to be one of them
The village locals will appear throughout the whole story so no need for side stories.... although maybe one would be a good idea now that I think about it. But yeah i can add you in just give me your characters description and I'll add you right in.
11161088 Something that may help is to use the auto reader on here. It will help you find small mistakes like the dragon lord sister instead of the drag Lord's sister.
Cadence's jaw fell open and her eyes went wide in shock once again "What?!"
"I can help you get rid of them if you want" he said casually as if he wasn't talking about murdering two ponies "We can even have a little fun while at it, i can rape Shining for cheating on you and you can rape Twilight for going with your husband. And after that we kill them"
Okay, seriously, what's with this dude? That's beyond fucked up.
"Oh my goodness!" she almost fainted "You're ABUSING SCARLET!?"
Abe shrugged "Sheesh Cadence not only are you jumping to conclusions but you're freaking out about it, chill out" he said, completly ignoring Cadence's outburst and acting as normal a usual. At least as normal as Abe could get
"HOW THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO REACT?" Cadence was furious. This was the one thing she did not expect Abe to do although she feared it a little. "You're literaly sexually abusing a little girl who is practically like an adopted daughter to you. You're taking advantage of the fact she has a crush on you for your own perversions, and you dare to say I'm overeacting!!?"
So, wait, when he suggests raping and killing members of her family, she barely reacts, yet she gets pissed off at the fact that a filly gave him a blowjob? Uh . . . okay, then.
"Listen Cadence" his voice was even more unsettling to hear as well "When i came here and built the first house that would start this village, i had a plan. I was going to show the creatures of this world a new way of life. Give them a taste of something more. This village is that taste. This is my work. And i believe you know very well what happens when others ruin my work. So let me tell you this. If you go out there and say anything that could jeopardize my work, i will make sure you regret ever having spawned into existence you miserable royal SLUT!" Cadence winced when he started to yell "You think you can go out there and talk things you shouldn't? Well guess what bitch. I know things as well. Open that whore mouth of yours the wrong way and i swear the next day the newspapers will be having this as a headline: 'Princess Cadence. A drug addict royal who abused her power to establish drug trafficking networks on the Crystal Empire, is associated with illegal groups and has her husband cheating on her with his own sister'. How's that for a headline bitch!?"
"And don't you go and tell me I'm abusing Scarlet. Accuse me of that again and you would beg me to kill you. Even though I won't. You know, you should be thanking me. When i heard news that a princess had suddenly arrived at our doorstep, normally i would have locked you in a basement and turned you into a rape slave before finally snuffing you up. But i didn't. You know why? Because i saw something in you. I saw that you hated the life you lived and wished to escape the burdens or royalty. And i had what you wanted. So i spared you and gave you the chance to live free of royal duties without having ponies acting silly in your presence and kissing the ground on which you walk. I gave you peace. All for free. Hence i think i at least deserve a little gratitude for not letting you get eaten by the dogs that day. So get your sluty royal ass over here and sit on that fucking chair cause we ain't done talking. NOW!"
Uh . . . this guy does know that he's not only threatening a princess, but that he's threatening the niece of both Princess Celestia and Princess Luna as well as the sister-in-law of Princess Twilight Sparkle, right? He would do well to keep his mouth shut.
First. Nice. Second. I would like a side story of abe or Scarlet. I wish to see the every day workings of this island and all the fucked up people in it. Third. If you do make a side story of the inslads local residences I would like to be one of them.
Good story, but these chapters are in dire need of an editor, preferably one that can catch spelling and grammatical mistakes.
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If you don't know, Abe will actually be appearing in my other stories, which technically makes all my stories side stories of each other. And yes since Abe is technically an eldritch god 'he' will actually be on all of them(although he will have different names and different forms. You don't expect an eldritch god to just have a pony form do you) and not just like different stories with same characters 'he' will actually be there. It pays having a character that has access to multiversal travel wouldn't you say so. Oh and Scarlet will also show up in my other stories as well, although a little different. In this story, Cadence will actually not only be studying Shining and Twi but Also Abe and Scarly and some other people in the village.
First of all yes you will get to see that. Second of all who said it's an island? Like in chapter two it is specified that BlackFlag village is just an anarchist village hidden in the middle of a forest two or three hours away from Ponyville. I don't know where you got the impression this is an island.
The village locals will appear throughout the whole story so no need for side stories.... although maybe one would be a good idea now that I think about it. But yeah i can add you in just give me your characters description and I'll add you right in.
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Working on it. English isn't my first language so i am aware i might make some mistakes.
Nice
Interesting story so far
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Just wait till you read the part where Syke! Didn't think i was going to spoil my own story now did you?
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you got me can’t believe I fell for that
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If you don't mind me asking when will the next chapter be out ?
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Soon. Perhaps even today. I have been busy with other stuff but now I'm back working on the next chapter
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Something that may help is to use the auto reader on here. It will help you find small mistakes like the dragon lord sister instead of the drag Lord's sister.
Okay, seriously, what's with this dude? That's beyond fucked up.
So, wait, when he suggests raping and killing members of her family, she barely reacts, yet she gets pissed off at the fact that a filly gave him a blowjob? Uh . . . okay, then.
Uh . . . this guy does know that he's not only threatening a princess, but that he's threatening the niece of both Princess Celestia and Princess Luna as well as the sister-in-law of Princess Twilight Sparkle, right? He would do well to keep his mouth shut.