First Passionate Kiss

TwiDash1,191 stories ·4,237 members

Rainbow Dash reads The Daring Do books with Twilight when the two spend time together at her house. but turns out that reading becomes something else when only reading and Pinkie Pie knows as well.

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Diamond Sparkle

Diamond Sparkle #1 · Dec 15th, 2022 · 1 · ·

A nice little fic.

Diawesome

Diawesome #2 · Dec 15th, 2022 · · ·

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Thanks! l just not ready to make a long story.

RainbowDashieTHEBEST

RainbowDashieTHEBEST #3 · Dec 15th, 2022 · 2 · ·

This isn't bad I like it. My favorite ship is Twidash too. Hope to see more of your story's. :)

Diawesome

Diawesome #4 · Dec 15th, 2022 · · ·

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Thanks, l gonna do oneshot for while, then l maybe do long story.

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #5 · Dec 16th, 2022 · · ·

Alright, so this is a little rough around the edges, I'm not gonna lie. But you also seem to have a pretty good grasp on these characters and the overall narrative isn't too bad. So I'd say keep practicing, you've definitely got it in you.

Diawesome

Diawesome #6 · Dec 16th, 2022 · · ·

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l do story for fun.

AgentKorpsman

AgentKorpsman #7 · Dec 17th, 2022 · 1 · ·

After their last kiss, they both read books and they are very happy now that they have each other. Pinkie Pie watches from the window, smiles, and walks back to Sugarcube Corner.

*meanwhile Cadance watching from afar nods her head in approval*

AgentKorpsman