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KMCA

KMCA #1 · Jun 4th, 2012 · · · Chapter 3: Refracted ·

And that ladies and gentlemen is where I believe the question of a dark tag vanishes

KMCA

KMCA #2 · Jun 4th, 2012 · · · Chapter 5: The Royal We ·

Why do I get the sudden feeling that this is the diary of Queen Chrysalis?

Biker_Dash

Biker_Dash #3 · Sep 17th, 2012 · · · Chapter 5: The Royal We ·

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DAMMIT! You took the words right out of my mouth!

One thing that I have thought of. You mentioned the Elements of Harmony. You have got me thinking. Could it be that the Elements of Harmony that Celestia used to beat Nightmare Moon so long ago were in fact ponies like the current Mane Six?

Must look further into this. There may be a story behind this that needs to be told.

PlagenShiki

PlagenShiki #4 · Oct 23rd, 2013 · · · Chapter 3: Refracted ·

Brilliant. This just gets better and better.

PlagenShiki

PlagenShiki #5 · Oct 24th, 2013 · · · Chapter 4: Monsters ·

I did not see that coming. :O I can't wait to see what happens next!

PlagenShiki

PlagenShiki #6 · Oct 27th, 2013 · · · Chapter 7: Alpha ·

Brilliant.

FearoftheDark

FearoftheDark #7 · Jun 1st, 2014 · · · Chapter 7: Alpha ·

I forget when I made my original comment but I always thought the best ending would be that Twilight was the reincarnation of the main character made to work for peace. Kind of like the KOTOR Revan plot twist. At first it was kind of implied even I think.
Edit: I may be thinking of a different story actually. Whoops.

Azure-Spark

Azure-Spark #8 · Jun 6th, 2014 · · · Chapter 7: Alpha ·

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It might've been this one, but I dropped the framing device (that had that implication) because it felt kinda forced and it was by far the weakest part of the story.

FearoftheDark