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SashayGallant


"If you want to achieve greatness, stop asking for permission" "Hold onto your hooves, I'm about to be BRILLIANT."

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Dew Blossom has a relatively easy life. She sells flowers on the other side of town while her partner Roseluck does the same. It seems like a pretty boring existence. The highlight of her day is greeting a colt on his way to work. But this stallion has bigger plans than she could have anticipated.

What will happen when he strips her of her boring life, and tries to liven things up?

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Comments ( 6 )

I agree, put an extra space between each paragraph and it will be fine. Could also be longer. Good job so far though. :pinkiehappy:

Bookmarked. I'll read this soon.

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Yeah, you'll have to excuse the formatting on this first chapter. The computer I typed it on was using a different word processor than the one I possess now, so it got........ odd. :twilightblush:

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Formatting has been changed. Thank you for pointing it out :3

This is interesting, keep going.

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