• Published 4th Mar 2024
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MLP meets the Pleistocene - Nighthawk alpha bravo



Two brothers and a friend end up in Equestria as some of the most fearsome predators of the past

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Comments ( 7 )

They're going to freaking regret it with the harsh truth;

That these dinos are actually freaking intelligent and sentient. :pinkiecrazy:

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It was good. Though practice more on the 's and "s when writing. And be sure to double check on the character's talking cause there were a few that were off. But also, I have a plan to deal with poachers.

11921827
Will do, a lot of that one was rushed so that’s on me lol, but I’d be very interested on what you have in mind for the poachers.

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Well, to save comment space here. Send a PM to me about the poachers, I'll tell you how to deal with them. But first: Tell me the situation of the ponies as well as the three humans. So I can devise a plan of attack.

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I see, been a while since I’ve used this site, how do I send a private message.

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Go to Mail. Type what you want to say to me. But first write a title about a subject, then write in the comment and send. Easy as pie.:pinkiehappy:

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