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I've got Shining Armor tied up in my basement for molestation purposes.

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Too Kinky! In a good way, of course.
That's how one can play the game.

Shining knew exactly what Candance was up to. The truth spell made the story believable given that Twilight would have never had the courage to confess otherwise.

Good story. Very enjoyable.

11931229
Yeah I mean porn doesn't have to be believable but if it's at least feasible I can headcanon it happening at some point.

11931098
A truth or dare game where people hold back is just disappointing. :fluttercry:

Cadence is devious as hell

11931405
She is exactly as devious as she needs to be. :trollestia:

11931456
I thought it might be.

11931229
Only raises question if consent coerced that way is a consent legally in that world.

11931501
Twilight said that they needed consent for the spell so that implies consent for the actions the spell causes

11931501
Well if she didn't consent, she would have honestly said she didn't.
Also everything a princess does is legal automagically anyway.:trollestia:

11931687
Spotted a mistake

her lips popped over her muzzle

. I suppose by context it's "his muzzle"

11931501
If Equestria had laws, Flim and Flam would be behind bars. :pinkiecrazy:

11931832
There's a loophole where you can do anything so long as you sing a song about it.

“Hay!” Twilight flexed her wings defensively, raising up her head when her back half was drenched. “What was that for?” But Twilight knew by this point. By Celestia’s eldritch mane, this was really happening. How could this be happening?

This threw me a little bit because Twilight is smart enough to know what's happening (as evidenced by the second half of the paragraph) but while under the spell, she shouldn't be able to lie. I feel like she would have been compelled to ask 'you're going to make Shining lick that off me, aren't you?' or somesuch. As just asking 'what was that for?' is a lie of omission so strong I feel like it would trigger the spell!

Magical semantics aside, it was good. :twilightsmile:

11931904
You know what, that's not a bad point that I didn't think of. I'll alter it.

now Shiny has to knock up Caddy again! must have 2 preggo mares at the same time!

11933568
cuz Cadence said so....

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