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not bad you se the seen well and thanks for not making this a clop fic:twilightsmile:

#2 · Jan 11th, 2012 · · ·

lol... nice but needs a sequel... this is why i don't read many one-shot fics because they end but you just want them to keep going..

With a (to use the vulgar term) wingboner ending! HURRAY!:rainbowlaugh:
Nice short read, I like the balance of sweet with the competitiveness of Rainbow Dash.
Short, but it gets to the point.

Aww, cute with a bit of saucyness. There needs to be more SoarinDash around. :twilightsmile:

#6 · Jan 21st, 2012 · · ·

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my thoughts exactly

my face when soarin said he hadent kissed a girl before :rainbowlaugh:

You should of added a lot more that was way to short:facehoof:

Soarin' checked himself, "Nah, I've had worse crashes bight in flight cam- Say, I remember you," he said.

Yeah especially when you got kicked in the face by Rarity causing you and the others to fall unconscious

"Me? I was just practicing my newest move, 'The Super Awesome Nosedive of Awesomeness!!!'" she answered, raising her front legs high as if she were giving a rousing speech, "it's kinda in its prototype stages, but I know it will be twenty percent cooler if I keep working on it."

Oh yes working title sequence and that 20% cooler I miss that quote

This is definitely a pretty nice story and I really like it so Rainbow Dash was basically minding her business and doing tricks of flying until she bumped into the pony that she never thought to see it was none other than the Wonderbolt himself soarin and she was about to blow up when she saw him but she kept her cool but it looks like they decided to have a little race which they did and yeah I got to admit rainbow is still the fastest one ever and he even admitted to that one and not only that with all the adrenaline going on she couldn't help it but gave him a kiss and she felt embarrassed about doing that but somehow he liked it and it looks like they shared a kiss which it was a little fast when it comes to relationship but it was still nice still like the shipping between those two keep up the good work

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