I was originally going to hold off on this but the new episode inspired me. This takes place at the wonderbolts training camp, but deviates slightly. I know the characters say other but that is only untill they put Lightning Dust in the characters list. Yes she is in here.
I openly welcome all comments.
WOW do i really have six stories now??? AMAZING
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EDIT: Seven and counting as of now.
Can't wait!
sounds like this is going to be good
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Poor spitfire in this chapter the only mistake i found was some simple grammar mistakes. Your getting better and better at this.
You said you'd openly welcome all comments and straight after that 3 where deleted
Where they Trolls?
Y'know I had a feeling it was gonna be SpitDash or RainFire
Which one sonds cooler?
1808622 the ones that were deleated were mine and the Soviet Rainbow. I deleted his because there was a spoiler and we were just chatting.
I'm liking rainfire much better.
keep it up these are small so im hoping it wont take weeks to put new chapters up unlike most other stories
I usualy have a small story like ths compleatly up in a few days. Im distracted right now. I just published the first chaper of my next Twidash titled The amazing effects of cider. ENJOY.1809385
I like it!!! Looking forward to seeing more!!
1820315 Glad you like it. Taking a back seat to one of my other stories for now but i will start writing it again soon.
The last chapter is out. You may notice I have deleted several comments. I will not delete your comments. All the comments were mine and no longer needed, I was attempting to lesson the amount of comments i put in my own stories. I really enjoyed this last chapter, I hope you do/did as well.
I can now proudly click the completed button. I now pronounce this story a Rainfire.
getting lots of faves. Thanks all.
What a great ending! And only a single spelling mistake, rainbow instead of raimbow (at first i thought it said rambo). I WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this was legit a good story please continue on stories like this but longer yay
MOAR!
This grammar is horrid. You should get a pre-reader.
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