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Cross Hair, a grey unicorn stallion is badly injured in a Timber wolf encounter. He wakes up days later to find that he is being cared for by a yellow pegasus mare. What will happen when this hunter falls prey to his emotions? What is the secret he is keeping from his hostess and her friends and why does a certain purple dragon not trust him?
Fluttershy X O.C.
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Why is a pony hunting in the first place...?
1908936 I'll explain later on.
1909029
Calling it now, he comes from a tribe of carnivorous ponies and is planning on eating Fluttershy.
Pretty good
Please continue!
1909029 He's a Ghoul Hunter!
brb, reading...
EDIT: Here's some pointers:
You should put commas around names in dialogue. Like this:
Also this:
It's 'course' not 'coarse'
'Coarse' is an antonym to 'fine'
I have to agree with Cross, Fluttershy can be cute 24/7
Looks interesting, I'll definitely have to read it later
Looks great! Can't wait for more!
1909035 LE GASP*
I WOULD NEVER TO THAT TO FLUTTERSHY! Jut the thought of that makes me
You'll see in the next chapter!
Sweet, looking good so far! Well, it's only the first chapter; but nevertheless I am looking forward to future chapters!
Kawai!!!!!!!!!!!!
X9000
Read Bio..first thing i said: SICK NAME!!
Hahahaha ahoy matey, second fave oc design aside from Beat
And then, Fluttershy was Russian.
(No offense to Russians.)
I love this story.
Please MOAR!!!!
A pet wold? Already on to the AWESOMENESS
So...his best friend's a wolf?....Awesome!
and what competition? 
still never get tired of your work, mate, practically your fics are the only ones i wanna spend my tim with 
and Spike is just being a dick now, he hates Cross, he hates Shield WTB, Spike?!
1926044 Shield is a cop with a sketchy past that Rarity has a crush on.
(I'll explain why Spike is suspicious of him in future chapters)
Cross is a badass hunter.
Till then :
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I wish I could hear Fluttershy's tummy rumbling.
1928922 Don't we all?
I wonder what this competiton is?
1929012 You'll see
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YEA DOVAHSHY
And Cross Hair (I call him another dragonborn) Tag team in dragon battling
Another great chapter !
1940228 Oh, look. I'm walking down this path, there is NO WAY a dragon is just going to- *dragon swoops down* OMG RUN, RUN!!
Well, it's not doing anything yet. Maybe it's friendly.
Also, explain the dynamics of having a friendship with dragon society whilst having a pet that hates them with a passion and vice-versa.
1943008 I'm working on it!
Fluttershy...peeking....
Oh and all the mares in heat? This is gonna be goooooood.
Ermahgerd, I love this and the possibilities it holds... Unfortunately, it's really rushed; if you developed and fleshed out the events more, it'd be even better! Keep up the good work! <3
1946004 Oh trust me theres still so much more to come.
Round two begins....
Pulling ponies into the ground. Naruto move?
1961619 Eeyup, couldn't resist.
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Umm? How did fluttershy get there on par with them?
1969539 She caught up to them.
It keeps getting better!
1971278 The fun hasn't even begun!
Let the Games Begin!!!!!
That was inFAMOUS 2 inspired, wasnt it?
Ahhhh but hey, this fic got interesting fast, da buck is this game they keep chatting about?
and definitely best OC out of the other 3 
1974501 You mean when he absorbed the sphere?
Kind of, I've seen Infamouse 2 walkthroughs but never played.
I just figured it would be a cool way for him to absorb it. I'll explain what it was in the future. The explination is CRAZY!
Did he use an assassin's creed climbing abilities?
A doctor who reference AND a reference from the grey?!
U 
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May the odds be ever in your favor, Cross!
We need some good chase music for the next chapter I say
1978052 No more like Spiderman.
1978228wasn't trying to do that. I don't even like spiderman (OMG YEA ITS DA TRUTH)
1978372 I'm not talking about movie spiderman I mena classic comic book Spiderman.
What eves not everyone likes him.
Oh my Celestia I thought he'd do a Naruto but instead he put traps everywhere that is gonna be good.
Oh, Cross, you're funny
you're just trolling everypony with Beat's cloning spell
and having what seems to be a common breakfast in Equestria 
youre scaling walls, killing monsters, you remind me of somepony I know 