There are a few Jakes on this website. I'm the ginger one.
Fancy Pants is one of the most powerful and charismatic nobles in all of Equestria. But sometimes, the life of a Canterlot noble can be tiring. So a refreshing trip to Ponyville on Hearts and Hooves day seemed like a fantastic idea.
What he hadn't expected was to run into Pinkie Pie.
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Good one really needs a sequel.
Seems like a nice read, funny that Fancypants is dating Pinkie Pie, bonus points to you for an original shipping. And now it seems that Fancypants has brought out the wild animal inside of Pinkie Pie now that he basically dating Pinkie. I can't imagine the horror on Rarity's face when she see a noble like him with someone as crazy as pinkie, shenanigans insure.
Nice work man
PS. might be better to have this story updated with new chapters as opposed too making another story
This is certainly new and interesting. I like it!
A sequel
Please do
That last line kinda feels like a cliffhanger... More?
Hmm.. FancyPie, could be delicious and unique.
fancy-pants and pinkie.....
I SMELL ORIGANALLITY HERE.
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My thoughts exactly.
It would be hard to ruin this premise. If you were trying to, you failed horribly. If you were trying to write a good story, on the other hand, I have a few pointers. First, you didn't describe the character's expressions as they were speaking often enough. This may not seem to detracting, but far too many times I found myself wondering "What was did Pinkie look like when she said that?" Still, it was funny and quirky, and I don't regret reading. As for a sequel, this story is incomplete. It needs a chapter 2, not a part 2. And a romance tag.
I love original ships, and this is as original as it gets. I would very much enjoy a continuation of this, please.
I liked it
I thought it was nice and cute. Also, I think you did a very good writing both Pinkie and Fancy Pants.
SEEEEEEEQUEEEELL!!!!
My good sir this was bloody fantastic and hilarious. Perfect combination. I wish for a sequel!!!
Not bad, not bad at all.
I think 51 likes and 0 dislikes speaks for the story well enough, I voted, and I would like to see a sequel.
What Tasks must be performed to bring a sequel
I know this isn't what you'd like to hear, but I had a hard time reading this and finally gave up about 1/3 of the way through. The concept here seems very promising, and from your scores it seems like a lot of people have really enjoyed this story. But I found it jarring to see an error within the first three sentences, and a number of others in the span I read before stopping. An editing pass could easily fix most of these. There were also some tense issues that popped up, and a lack of referents in cases like Fancypants' thoughts about Rarity's lying.
I always try to leave comments with both praise and criticism, but unfortunately about 1/3 of the way through I'd stopped reading the story for enjoyment and had fallen into looking for helpful critiques I could give, which is why I decided to give up on it. Again, the idea here is good. I like the voice in which you write Fancypants and your sentence structure was generally good. But you wound up losing me on the errors an editing pass should have weeded out.
do another one PLEASE
twas amazing
Pinkie Pie at Blueblood's party, I smell hijinks with a probable mane deflating and Fancy Pants being the hero of a high society party once again.
Whoops
*Finishes chapter two.*
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This is very well-written and a wonderful take on Fancy Pants. It's not often a story is in first-person through his perspective.
Definitely deserves a favorite and an upvote
I wonder what's Pinkie doing in the wardrobe?
This is gonna be fun...
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Obviously travelling to Canterlot by way of Narnia.
(Alternate joke: Coming out of the closet?)
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And then that thing below me was created.
Fancy: Pinkie Pie won't come out of the clooseet, why won't she come of the closet...? Andnow I PULL OUT MY MONOCLE!
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Well, he *has* to be wearing the monocle so it can "poing!" off of his face comedically when Pinkie comes out of the closet and reveals she's really a boy!
Ugh, somehow I didn't favorite this story, just found out that there is an unread chapter that needs to be read.
Nice chapter, funny to see the romantic triangle going on, while Fancypants tries to keep the situation under control. Now, it'll be amusing to see how he reacts now that PP somehow shows up in Canterlot instantly, and as well as their interaction on the streets of Canterlot.
Really nice chapter, keep up the good work.
Just finished reading this on a whim, and I'm very glad I did. This story is excellent, and I would love to see more. Good job sir!
I'd love it if you would someday finish this. It was a pleasure to read, and something entirely new- a pairing I would have never thought of. But now that you brought it to our attention...They fit. You make it work. And I'd love to see where it goes from here.
I hope that you plan to continue writing this story. I really like it and I would love to see how this relationship with Pinkie Pie and Fancypants works out. I would also like to see how Pinkie Pie behaves during Blueblood's party and how the other noble react to her.
Any chance for more?
I like both Fancy Pants behavior and how his personality bounces against Pinkie's. I feel like they would make a really good couple and would like to see how the other nobles would react to Pinkie.
As other have already stated, any chance for more?
Very nice, it's fun to see a fic that goes into a bit more detail about Fancy Pants' personal life aoart from being the nice noble from Canterlot. It's fun to see his calm composed demeanor clash and bounce off of Pinky's energetic personality. Rarity, not a noble, but carries herself with the grace and dignity of one but not forgetting her friends and becoming a boring jerk like, oh, Blueblood for example. I wonder just how much power his title of "Prince" holds. I wonder why he's called Fancy Pants if he doesn't even wear pants?
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it's pinkie pie
no what's