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For what it ended up being, I really enjoyed it. It gets the point across so that the story can continue.
Even not under the spell Lance and Twilight are neglecting her. I think that reflects on them as people, as it sticks to their characters. Lance has always been a happy go lucky idiot and Twilight is Twilight. They’d just want to apologize and get things back to normal as fast as possible, assuming Fawn would instantly forgive them.
Not the case clearly.
I’ve held back on saying anything about Fawn till the end of her arc. I really like how she handles herself. The moment she gets away from her parents she seems to grow as a mare and becomes her own dominating force. Plus she’s happy. But the moment she’s brought back to them she clams up and struggles to stand up for herself. I can relate.
I’m interested in seeing how she’ll be portrayed going forward.
Also Scamp will not be happy about any of this going forward. This would be one of the few times she lost control of a situation.
Hold up. I just reread this and missed an important detail hidden in a throwaway line.
Who killed her parents?? This implies it was someone Lance was already friends with, due to him “staying friends” with the person after finding out. I’ve scanned through early LTD and there are only a few possibilities. I’ll keep them to myself, but holy sheet Batman this caught me off guard.
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Canonically, you’re weak. Sorry my guy, I don’t make the rules.
I know it's been a while since you posted a chapter, but I need more Fawn content. I connect with her in a way that isn't me loins.