Rarity’s eyes were shut, and the velvety darkness behind her eyelids was soft and comforting as Opalescent’s fur. The only sound was the crackling of the logs on the fire, and the only sensation the delicious rise and fall of her marefriend’s ribcage.
A Quillmas gift for AshleyNoble.
Cute
Opaline's fur?
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--Sweetie Belle
Yes. All my yes. You took the assignment and made me grin and feel warm and tingly. Thank you!
11467821
it's in the short description and everything. Thanks for pointing it out!
11468467
That mistake is … not exactly fixed, I think. I remember her cat’s name is a noun, which is Opalescence, and not an adjective - Opalescent.(I mean, that cat has a character tag on fimfiction, you could just look it up.)
The story is pretty great! Love their dynamic, keep up the good work!
11468467
No problem!
Though, as 11468542 says, it should be Opalescence or just Opal.
Of course, I don't necessarily have in issue with Rarity having experience with how soft and comforting Opaline's fur is. That'd just be a rather different story.
--Sweetie Belle
cute sweet little raritwi fic, like a candy
and I love candy, and I love raritwi