Warning! The first chapter has some scenes of light child abuse. Do not read the first chapter if this is triggering.
This story is after the events of the episode "Crusaders of the Lost Mark."
After Diamond Tiara confronted her mother, she was mysteriously transformed into an alicorn. Despite her sudden transformation, confronting and "humiliating" her mother, Spoiled Rich punishes Diamond Tiara by sending her away to a Boarding School, Coldstone Acadamy, for young fillies and forces her to hide her wings. Diamond Tiara now has to survive this rather brutal academy, navigating dull, soul-crushing classes while dealing with fillies that acted like how she was before. Meanwhile, after noticing Diamond Tiara's disappearance, the Cutie Mark Crusaders do some investigating, learn what happened, and go on a mission to rescue their friend.
Cover Artist: Pridark
How much more darker and more serious will this story be when compared to canon?
I know children often listen to adults and parental figures above most anything, but this is a bizarre premise. Once anyone else figures out she's an alicorn, Spoiled wouldn't be able to influence Diamond again.
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Not really serious more like series unfortunate events style of dark but it gets lighter as the story goes.
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Yes, that's true; it's an empty threat that Spoiled is using against her daughter in a desperate attempt to remain in control. It sounds bizarre, but I've been through something similar to Diamond Tiara, so I am putting some of my experience into this story.
An interesting scenario, though the opening felt a little rushed and redundant, I look forward to more.
Good luck.
Will Silver Spoon ever appear in this story?
Wrong "bawled."
And now you have boarding school and seven years of bad luck to look forward to.
Also, Spoiled B***h is worst pony. If there's one kind of character i can't abide... that would be traffickers. But if there's a SECOND kind, that's abusive relatives.
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Next chapter she and the CMC will enter the story
Maybe she is just mad that they wasted perfectly good oatmeal that stuff doesn't grow on trees
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This is a bit too strict and miserable for me. I was expecting some bullying, sure. But not from all the staff as well. Story gives me the feeling of what I call 'misery simulators'. I'll pass.
Spoiled Rich you fucking whore!!! Why send your daughter to this terrible place when YOU caused that bullcrap in the first place?! Diamond Tiara doesn't want to be your slave! This is child abuse! And when the Crusaders get her out I hope they tell Princess Celestia on you and have you locked up in jail!!!!
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The CMC and Diamond Tiara are going to do more then that lol
More like they kept her "from" going down that path.
You could always.... do both.
- MLP: FiM
- Slice of Life
After running across the Crusaders in Manehattan, Rainbow finds out a little secret Scootaloo had been keeping from her.If a filly that isn't fond of the girly-girl stuff can perform lke that.... I mean, I'm just saying.
Enact. Not react. Two VERY different things.
"Greetings. Spoiled Rich. The honour is yours."
Doesn’t make sense when she said she can’t fly yet
Liking it so far! I don’t see much stories with all girls school on this site so it’s really great so far. If I was there I would encourage Cherry to take Ballet since it’s perfect for athletes since becoming flexible and stronger from Ballet helps a ton in sports even for Wonderbolts.
Snowdrop is cool to see. A different take but a welcome one.
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Thanks for the comment there is alot more coming in regards to these characters