• Published 19th Nov 2023
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Our Name Across The Multiverse: 10 years later - DATONETWIxDASHFAN



The endless sea of the multiverse, anything and everything, will and had happened...but what will happen when a lone girl, with a golden rainbow sun core, lost its reason to shine and raise its dawn? A endless night will come to the multiverse

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Chapter 25: Into the Dash/Pinkie-Verse

Lauren breathed heavily as she watched the shadows backing off. The sun came out from over the hill and shone down on them. The shadows glared at her before disappearing into thin air. She sighed with relief.

"I'm glad that's over...for now." She teleported back into the plant-looking car and swapped places with Brishen as she drove again. She eyed the young adult and could see how freaked out he was. "You okay? The shadows didn't hurt you, right?"

Brishen slowly looked at her with a weird smile and twitching eyes, like a man who saw the true horrors of the world.
"I'm...not fine."

Lauren sighed, knowing what she had to do. She needed to edit his character again to calm him down, but before she could, Brishen put his hand up and relaxed on his own.

"But I will be. This is for Blitz, after all; what's a few mental scars for a dear friend?"

Lauren's heart warmed, and she patted his head like a mother proud of their kid.

"Good to see that you're okay. We'll be at the beach soon!"

Brishen looked before him and noticed no other cars, which felt odd. He looked back at her and believed it was her doing, and maybe that's why the shadows attacked them.

"Yes," said Lauren, reading the sentence up above. "That's the reason. I'm editing the world around us right now. I can't have other cars in the way and get caught in the crossfire."

"Then, can't you just, I dunno, teleport us to the beach?"

He suddenly could see her shaking with fear, like she was remembering a horrible thing.

"Sorry, that's out of the question. If I do that, the guardians will release their leader, and I'm not in full power to fight it right now. Plus, I don't want Wallflower here to get hurt. It's her body, after all."

Brishen didn't say anything and just looked at the road, wondering what else could happen and if the others were alright. But he couldn't stop thinking about something. It was about

"Your universe guardians won't step in to deal with Rainbow Sun Dawn."

Brishen looked at her and just waited for the rest of her sentence.

Lauren started to mess with the radio once more. "Rainbow Sun Dawn was created by... a higher being and has a lot of power in her hands. The guardians can't do anything to her because she's basically 'her' guardian and outranks them, but she calls Rainbow Sun Dawn and the others "saviors," her guardians, to wipe out 'her' from existence."

"So... who's this 'higher being'? Is it the creator of all things? Like, god?"

She said nothing, only changing the radio channel and finding a good song to listen to. Brishen kept looking at her, making her feel uncomfortable.

"Can you...not?"

"Not what?"

"Look at me like that."

"Like what?"

"With those puppy dog eyes. As if I know the answer."

"Do you?"

"...yes."

"Then why aren't you?" he said, stopping as he could see her crying like she was fighting with herself to tell him. "You can't, can you?"

She nodded. "Because if I tell you, it might change this already messed up timeline even more. 'She' needs to return to this world, and I can't risk changing the past....even more."

Brishen rubbed his head, not understanding what was happening. He's just a simple boy who wants to help his friend out—not dealing with this new shit, time travel shit now.

"Just know this. The one above me and the others like me have many names: fate, destiny, writer, reader, and watcher. She's very dangerous." She looked at Brishen with a sad smile. "When 'she' returns to us to stop 'her,' please stand by her side like always. Promise me."

Brishen looked at her worriedly. "Are you talking about that violet-looking girl I saw when I touched that jacket that Wallflower is wearing?" He watched her look at the jacket and realized who it belonged to as she placed her hand on it.

"The jacket belongs to... her. Another timeline, another story. Where she failed in stopping her from rewriting her story."

"It's Blitz, isn't it?" asked Brishen.

Lauren couldn't say anything for a few minutes until she held the jacket tight, tears dripping down on it.

"I had to watch her die so many times, watching her story change so many times—she doesn't remember me at all when we meet again. My dear student." She slowly let go of the jacket and wiped her tears away. "But no matter the timeline or what new story is created, she always comes back and, like always, moves forward. Always smiling."

"That's...Blitz, alright."

Lauren couldn't help but chuckle a bit and nod. "Yes. That's...her alright."

She looked at Brishen, who looked at her back.

"You are going to keep that promise, right?"

He nodded, which made her feel a bit better. "Thank you. She needs to step out of that prison she made for herself and fade away in there... so that they can..." she shook her head. "Never mind, I'm telling too much, but don't worry, you'll see yourself soon enough."

He looked at the road again and wondered how Blitz was doing. Heck, how was Wallflower doing? He could see the ocean in the far distance, with the morning sun rays hitting it, the morning dawn appearing.


Blitz quietly went down the stairs, as everyone was still asleep until she could hear work done in the basement, the door half open. She remembered Twilight liking Sunset Plan and believed she could do something to help out. She asked if Twilah had a workshop in the house, and she told her about the basement workshop. She's been working all night in there.

Blitz looked at the basement and was worried about Twilight, but she headed to the front door and left. She quickly turned to her anthro form and took off towards the meeting spot that Dawn texted her to be at, as she wanted to talk. Blitz gulped and was completely worried about what she wanted to talk about, which no doubt was the way she acted toward Sunny and Wilma.

"Okay, Blitz, calm down. Nothing bad happened when you did that—other than pinning the girls down and giving yourself to them to use you as a se-OH GOD, I FUCKED UP! Why did I do that? IT WAS LIKE SOMEONE MADE ME DO THAT!" She screamed in her mind, feeling ashamed of herself and her actions.

She flew slower but was unaware someone was following her—her sister, Braver. Using a cloud as cover, only her eyes and anthro tail can be seen.

"Blitz," whispered Braver, as she was worried for her little sister and her mental state.

Blitz finally arrived at the meeting spot near the mall, but she could see something happening below. It was a robbery, and some dude in a mascot outfit had a girl in his arms, pointing something to her head. Blitz sighed as she knew who they were and slowly landed between them and the cops.

"RAINBOW COMET!" happily cheered Lucy, as she was the girl being held hostage by the guy in the rock outfit.


"FINALLY! MY ARCENEMY SHOWED HER FACE AGAIN! I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE AND TAKE OVER THIS TOWN! HAHAHA!" madly laughed the young man in the rock suit.

Blitz rubbed her eyes and spoke with a bored tone, "Rock Doom. For the last time, we're not archenemies."

"HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT WHEN YOU RUIN EVERY PLAN OF MINE, EVERY DAY, FOR MONTHS?"

Blitz blinked and spoke with a monotone, "I haven't seen you in months, dude."

"DON'T LIE TO ME, RAINBOW COMET! NOW PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE SKY, OR I'LL ROCK THIS GIRL!"

Blitz rolled her eyes. "What are you going to do? Shoot me with a rock like always."

Rock Doom looked a little upset as he held the rock. "Like yeah? Is it my superpower? Tossing rocks around. I thought it was cool and stuff. Like, what kind of powers did you want?"

"Dude, that's not a power! Everyone can do that!"

Rock Doom gasped as his world was shattered.

"Now, give me the girl and turn yourself in before I'm forced to kick your ass."

He chuckled and held the rock tighter, glaring at her.
"I'm not going back there! I'm staying a villain forever and ever!"

Blitz could see a cop coming from behind him and was about to tase him but missed.

"YOU FOOLS ARE TOO SLOW TO STOP ROCK DOOM!" he shouted as he tossed the rock at Blitz, who just stood there and yawned as this wasn't her first rodeo.

She was about to catch it, but a light blue and purple streak of ink-like trail passed her, and the rock was gone. Blitz knew who it was and started to sweat as the cops, Rock Doom, Lucy, and news reporters watched as Braver stood up near Blitz.

"Sis, what are you doing here!?" shouted Blitz, covering her mouth as everyone whispered that Rainbow Comet has a sister.

Braver looked at Blitz, then at Rock Doom blankly, and spoke as she crushed the rock in her hand.

"You dare hurt my little sister!?"

Rock Doom shook in fear as her words sounded cold and dark.

"It wasn't me! It was a misunderstanding, and she knows it!"

Braver was about to walk up to him, but Blitz grabbed her hand.

"Hey, sis, it's fine! We're good here! He's no-"

Braver turned back to Blitz, her eyes glowing purple, and she was mad. "Good? GOOD!? I WANT TO BEAT THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF THIS CREEP WHO WOULD DARE ATTACK MY LITTLE SISTER!" She pulled her hand away and returned, looking at Rock Doom, shaking with fear and letting Lucy go. "Tossing a rock at my dear little cute sister is a death sentence!"

Lucy's face was redder than a tomato, as she was fangirling so hard inside, and she couldn't believe Rainbow Comet had a calm and caring big sister. She mentally checked to write a fic about this later. She was so amazed by her that she didn't notice that with each step that Braver took, she left a large crater in her path.

"Please forgive me, ma'am." I swear, I was going to apologize to her after!" He begged as Braver got closer and closer, making him run off, jump into the cop car, shut it, and hide in fear. Everyone cheered at Rainbow Comet and her sister for saving the day as the police took off with Rock Doom. Braver looked at them with a death glare, and they took off faster, leaving behind the dust.

"Oh, you didn't have to scare the cops like that, sis. Man, I work with them; it will be hard to look at them now."

Braver looked back at Blitz with the same look and spoke, "They should be thankful that I'm not kicking their asses for almost letting you get hurt!"

"Please calm down and stop acting..." Blitz swung her arms around. "LIKE THIS!? YOU DAMN SISCON!"

Lucy was stunned as she heard everything. Her face was redder than ever, as it was like something out of an unholy, evil, lewd doujin. She covered her nose as she was about to have a nosebleed.

Braver became proud as she heard that word again, puffing her chest. "I love you so much! Of course, I'm a 'siscon'! You're my cute little sister; why wouldn't I be a siscon!?" Braver still doesn't fully understand the word's meaning other than a sister loving another sister deeply...

Blitz wanted to hide her face from the crowd. Everyone was talking about them, and she knew that it would be on the news. Everyone would talk about her and Siscon Braver, which would be embarrassing.

"Please go home! I'm here to meet with Lucy, and I don't need you messing this up! Okay!?" whispered Blitz, pulling her sister's ear and whispering it to her.

Braver was trying to get free as her sister was hurting her ear, but they stopped when the news reporter approached them, asking them if Braver was her sister, what her name was, and so on. Blitz didn't want to answer, but Braver put her arm around her, held her close, and answered them.

"Yes, this is my little sister, Rainbow Comet. The cutest in the world! She's a true hero! Isn't that right, my cute little sister?" Braver said, looking at her sister and kissing her on the forehead.

Blitz's face was redder than anything, and she couldn't find the words to speak. A news reporter stepped forward, asking them, What was her name?

"Oh, I'm not the hero! She's the real hero! And my name is..."

"Ink Comet!" shouted Blitz, knowing Braver would use her real name, and it would be bad. She's an ink comet!"
Braver blinked, as she didn't know what she had just said, but the crowd was in awe, taking photos and asking questions. Blitz smiled nervously as she waved at them. Braver saw her sister, copied her, and smiled with her, waving.

Lucy couldn't take her eyes off the sisters, as her heart was beating faster and faster, and she was so close to her hero, Rainbow Comet, that she even fell for her big sister, Ink Comet! She took out a drawing notepad from her side bag and quickly sketched the two, making sure to get every detail.

Blitz was annoyed, as Braver was holding her too close, and the crowd was watching, which was embarrassing.
"Hey, you can let me go now! We need to fly off, and I need to meet with Lucy, and you need to go back home," Blitz explained while smiling and whispering to her sister, who wasn't paying attention too much.

"But I'm having so much fun! It's been so long since I had time with you! Please let me stay for a while longer. Please, please, please!?" begged Braver, hugging Blitz tightly, and Blitz felt her sister's breast push against her, making her blush harder. She tried to get her off her, but she couldn't and struggled.

Meanwhile, Lucy saw the two, and she couldn't keep her hands still as she drew faster and faster, and the page was filling up fast. She was sweating hard and panting but stopped when she remembered she was in public and held her cross. Putting her pad away, she walked up to the two, wanting to speak to Rainbow Comet, but only after the crowd took their photos and allowed her to meet them.

"It's great to meet you again, Rainbow Comet. I hope we can be friends and hang out," Lucy said with a shy smile, blushing a bit.

Blitz smiled and said, "Sorry, but I don't have time to hang out. We-oof!?" Blitz got cut off as Braver shoved into her chest and spoke for her. "SURE! She needs to talk to you anyway!"

Blitz was trying to get air into her lungs. She didn't expect her sister to be so rough.

"Wait!? What!? Really!? Thank you so much!" Lucy jumped for joy as she finally had a chance to talk to her hero, Rainbow Comet.

Blitz looked up with a mad face and glared at her sister, who looked innocent and cute. "What do you think you're doing?"

Braver blinked and replied, "Helping you out, silly! You can't turn her down like that when you needed to tal-OOF!" Braver felt Blitz punching her in the gut and pain. Well, not really; she was pretending that Blitz wasn't strong enough to hurt her. "What was that for!?"

Blitz pulled her in and answered her. "Dummy! Lucy doesn't know I'm the Rainbow Comet yet! Now I have to tell her as Rainbow Comet rather than as myself. So, thanks for nothing!"

Blitz finally got free from her sister's hold and asked Lucy to come here, which she did. She screamed joyfully as Blitz held her and took off with Braver behind them.


Blitz asked her where she wanted to land so she could talk with her, and Lucy surprised her by saying her house.

"...r-really? What about your folks? They would be shocked to see me..." Blitz quickly corrected herself as Lucy gave her a confused look. "Because I'm a superhero, of course!"

Lucy needed clarification but understood. "Oh, well, it's okay. They aren't home right now. They're still setting up the fair, which will start in two days. Besides, they love you anyway!"

Blitz was shocked by that. "Really? They don't see me as the devil or something...Because many think I'm evil! HAHAHA!" laughed Blitz, a bit nervous, which Lucy giggled at.

"No, they don't think you are evil. My parents and I are huge fans of you. You're a real hero! Heck, my folks think you came from heaven and an angel!"

Blitz blushed at that and looked away.
"Well, Pegasi are like angels, I guess. So, where's your home?" asked Blitz, trying to change the subject.

Lucy pointed and gave the directions. They landed in her backyard and entered the house. Blitz had already been here before, so seeing all the bible quotes and crosses on the wall was not a shock to her—unlike her sister, who reenacted the same pose as Jesus on the cross, making Lucy laugh, and Blitz smacking her head and telling her to stop and act normal.

Lucy showed them to her room and closed the door. Blitz sat on the bed while Braver hopped beside her, and Lucy sat in a chair, facing them. Blitz smiled and took off her plain hoodie, and Lucy quickly asked her something.

"Where's the trademark purple jacket!? Don't tell me you're going to quit!? Please don't!?"

Blitz shook her head. "Of course not! It's just..." Blitz gave her a sad smile. "I'm not worth wearing it anymore. I've hurt my friends. That jacket was given to me by my dead parents. Telling me the symbol of the comet on the back of it is me, moving forward, and the friends I'll make...who will support and love me, but I failed by doing something awful to them," finishes Blitz, holding her plain hoodie.

Braver looked at her sister, wondering why she would think that.

Lucy was in disbelief. She had never seen her hero like this, and it was her fault for asking that question. She put down her side bag, took out a drawing notepad from her dresser, and showed Blitz her drawings of her Rainbow Comet. Surprising Blitz.

"I never meant to make you sad! You've done so much for everyone in town. You help those in need and are there when we need you. You are our hero! A symbol of hope and love!" She flipped the page to show the new drawing she had made, but it wasn't Rainbow Comet but Blitz herself in her human form, looking all cool and even having hearts around the picture, causing Lucy to close it and blush quickly.

Blitz and Braver were shocked, Blitz more than Braver, as she didn't know Lucy still saw her like that. Lucy put the drawing notepad away, embarrassed that she had revealed that to her hero.

"Sorry! That's my friend." She quickly looked away. "JUST A FRIEND! WHO I DON'T HAVE FEELINGS FOR! NOPE!"
Blitz was speechless, and Braver laughed and patted her back.

"ANYWAY! Want something!? Juice? Water? Snacks? You like snacks. I'll be right back!" She quickly exited the room and closed the door behind her, and both sisters could hear her geeking out as she headed down the stairs.

Braver went to the dresser, took out the notebook, and went through it again, liking how Lucy drew her sister. She turned to her, but she could see her still in shock.

"She loves me...still...in that way!" Blitz spoke in disbelief and looked at the door. "She must love me—more than I ever deserve."

Braver smiled and hugged her. "Of course, you deserve love. Everyone does, even us! So stop acting like that! Tell her how you feel, and don't be scared anymore!"

Blitz hugged back and cried, feeling her sister's love.

"Okay. I'll do it. Thanks, Braver."

"Anything for you, sis." Braver let her go, allowing Blitz to fix herself up. Braver went through the drawings but noticed another notepad in the bag as it fell out. She picked it up and went through it as well.

Blitz didn't notice this, as she was trying to think of ways to tell Lucy she's Rainbow Comet without freaking her out.
"Um, what if I just show her? I could just show her. I'll transform back into my human form. She'll freak out, maybe scream, and then calm down and accept it. Then I'll tell her I love her. Then I'll tell her, 'Hey, there's an evil version of you that wants to eat you and restart the multiverse. By the way, that's a thing, and I'm a pony." Blitz held her head. "Oh god, she's going to freak and faint or something! Braver, what should I do...BRAVER!?"

Blitz turned and was horrified by what her sister was doing. She was reading Lucy's notebook, but that wasn't the problem; the problem was that Braver's wings were standing up, and her second horn, too.

"SIS!? WHAT THE HECK!?"

Braver looked at her with a blushing smile, holding up a lewd image of herself and Blitz. Both are very well drawn and endowed, along with very detailed body art and poses.

Blitz became stunned as she saw that. Her face turned red, and Braver laughed at her reaction when her wings shot up, making Blitz shake her head.

"I knew she loved Rainbow Comet, but THIS!? Dang, she is a closet perv! Still, being homeschooled most of your life will do that. I must tell her this is not healthy. Braver put that away, and please start thinking of cute things! PLEASE!"
Braver pouted, closed the book, and put it back, but noticed something under the bed and pulled out a long pillow.

"LOOK, SIS! ITS YOU IN PILLOW FORM!" Braver yelled, and Blitz looked over and went red again as if it were a body pillow of her—in her rainbow comet form and naked.

"SHE EVEN GOT THE COLORS RIGHT DOWN THERE! LOOK SI-OOF!" Blitz-smack Braver in the head and toss the pillow back under.

"Never speak of this, okay! She mustn't know what we saw! I love her, even with the weird, unhealthy obsession over me—Rainbow Comet. She's still a sweet, innocent girl who cares much about me. Let's not embarrass her by finding more stuff, okay!? She already had it rough when she finally went to high school, and it was all weird because she was homeschooled all her life. I don't want to make her feel bad. I don't want to be the one who hurts her. Now, come on. Act normal. Like, we haven't seen anything, okay?"

"Right!" agreed Braver, sitting back down with her sister. They waited, but Braver gave her sister a sly look and whispered. "So...why did your wings go up when you saw that picture of us?"

"SHUT IT! I don't get turned on by that! STOP MESSING WITH ME! WE ARE NOT GOING THERE!" shouted Blitz, as she didn't want her sister to go any further in finding out the truth about her wings going up, as she pounded Braver's head.

Braver just pouted. "If you say so..."

It was only a short time until Lucy returned with many snacks and different juices, and she almost cleaned out her whole kitchen. She was nervous but calmed herself and set the food down.

"Alright. Here's the stuff."

"Thanks. Hey, um..." Blitz wanted to say something but couldn't as Lucy sat between the two and fed her some cookies.

"Want a cookie? They're homemade."

"Uh, sure!" Blitz took one, as it was a sugar cookie with orange juice. Lucy fed Braver some, too, who enjoyed the cookies.

"Oh, yummy! I wish my Dawn cooked like this!"

"Yeah. My mom taught me a few things, like-wait, what?"

Blitz froze, hearing what her sister said. Braver noticed her freeze and started to worry.

Lucy noticed both looking weird. "Are you two okay?"

"Huh? Oh yeah. It's just that..." Blitz tried to explain but couldn't. She sighed, not being able to hide it anymore. "Lucy, I'm not from this universe! I'm a pony!"

Lucy's eyes lit up when her hero said that, making her smile. "REALLY!?"

"Huh!? What!?" Blitz was confused by her reaction but remembered that she was still in her anthro form. "Oh, right! Hold on!"
She transformed into her proper form, making Lucy's eyes light up and gasp.

"OMG! YOU ARE A PONY! Oh my gosh! THAT IS SO AWESOME!" She grabbed Blitz and hugged her like a toy.

Blitz was red but quickly released her grip and turned back into her human form. Lucy was completely in shock when she saw Blitz in front of her.

"Blitz, you are the Rainbow Comet. That explains so much," whispered Lucy in realization.

Blitz was surprised she didn't faint or freak out—until she saw her going red in the face, quickly grabbing and holding her bag.

Braver took a few more cookies and pointed to the bag. "It's okay! We saw the drawings, and Blitz loved them; her wings stood up when she saw one. You got the colors perfectly down there with the pillow-ouch!"

"BRAVER!" Blitz punched her sister hard, making her fall to the ground and rubbing her head.

Blitz turned and could see Lucy's pure red and steam coming out of her head,

as her whole body was shaking.

"She's going to faint!" realized Blitz, who ran to her and caught her in her arms. "Oh no. Lucy! Please stay with me. I need to tell you something, and it's important. Please wake up!" begged Blitz, shaking her a bit, hoping Lucy didn't faint from them finding out she's a closet perv. "LUCY!!!!"


In the prime universe of Equestrian Girls, Pinkie took out candy from her hair, fused it with her magic, and was going to toss it, but she stopped as she heard the female guard chef talking to someone who had just entered the room.

"Sorry, but no one is allowed at this hour, miss. You have to leave or be banned-huh?"

Pinkie slowly poked her head out and saw the girl, wearing all pink, dancing towards the cakes, ignoring the chef. Pinkie knows the dance moves; it was ballet but very strange.

"Who's that girl?" asked Pinkie, never seeing her before.

"Miss!? Please leave, or I'll get the security guards!" threatened the chef.

The girl ignored her and continued dancing until she reached the cakes, sat at the table, and smiled.

The guard chief sighed. "You leave me no choice, miss. I-WHAT!?" The chef was suddenly wrapped up in the girl's ribbons, completely tied up, and couldn't move.

"Sorry, but I want to try the cakes. They look delicious!" said the girl, taking out her knife and fork and eating the cake.

The chef was surprised by this and was going to yell for help, but the ribbons covered her mouth, and she floated into the air.

The girl looked at her and smiled. "Can't you not be so loud? A lady is eating here. Don't want to bother me."

The chef couldn't believe this. The ribbons were magical. The girl smiled and enjoyed the cake.

"This is amazing! I must meet the baker of this cake."

"Yum, same here, sister!" replied Pinkie, sitting across from the girl and eating the exact cake.

The girl wasn't surprised by Pinkie's sudden appearance. "Hello. How are you?"

"I'm good. Who are you? I've never seen you around before," Pinkie said as the chef watched.

"Me? My name is Venus. Pinkie, it's nice to meet you finally. Well, another version of you. Want some tea? I have plenty."
Venus poured herself a cup of tea and started drinking.

Pinkie smiled. "Sure. Tea is always good."

Venus nodded. "Indeed. Tea is the best drink."

The two were talking while the poor chef waited for someone to notice.

"Pinkie!" shouted Dash as she burst through the door and stopped. Meanwhile, Twilight, who was under Dash's arm, saw her glasses fly.

"My glasses!?" shouted Twilight, failing to grab them.

Everyone watched as Twilight's glasses were about to hit the floor, but they were caught by the pink ribbons from Venus. The ribbons slowly returned the glasses to Twilight, putting them back on her and petting her head before Dash leaped away, put Twilight down, and gave her Wallflower.

"Man! Another one!" grunted Dash, readying to fight Venus.

Twilight looked at Venus. "You're like the others, aren't you?"

Pinkie shallowed her cake whole and asked what was going on.

"I'll explain," answered Venus, sipping her tea...for a long time, making everyone look at each other in confusion. Dash rolled her eyes and tapped her foot while Pinkie looked at her watch.

Venus finished drinking and looked at everyone.

"So yeah, I'm your prime universe guardian. My job is to remove any anomalies. Like the one that Twilight is holding." Her ribbons slowly rose and became sharp like blades. I am making Dash stand in front of Twilight and Wallflower. "Give her to me and return to how this story was meant. Or I'll have to cut the anomaly from her. Your choice."

"What if I refuse? And say no," challenged Dash.

Venus smiled. "That won't change anything; I'll take her by force." She walked slowly towards them but stopped as she sensed Pinkie breaking the fourth wall and appearing near her. But before Pinkie could finish, a giant paintbrush smacked her away, sending her into the tables and knocking all the food over her. Her friends screamed her name as Venus looked to her right and smiled. "Thank you, Mars. Only you can counter Pinkie's fourth wall powers."

Dash and the others looked to the right and saw a green alien-looking girl in a chair and painting something.

"No problem. Just keep going. I'll keep her busy with..." She rosed her arms into the air. "ART!"

Venus nodded and continued walking.

"Twilight, Wallflower, you two need to go now. I'll deal with her. Find the rest of the girls. I feel these 'guardians' are going after the rest of the girls now. Now go!"

Twilight nodded, held Wallflower tight, and ran out the doors with her.

Dash looked back and saw Venus right in front of her. She quickly spun around with her leg up, the ribbons wrapping around her neck, lifting her off the ground.

"You are a stubborn one. Just like your pony self and other versions in the multiverse, But no matter, I'll kill you anyway and rewrite you back later. No anomaly can escape my grasp. Not even the little anomaly you are protecting. She'll be gone from existence; if you don't hand her over, I'll cut Twil-Whoa!" Venus dodged a speed kick from Dash, as her magical speed was still working, and Dash doubled-kicked her in the chest. The kicks freed Dash from the ribbons, sending Venus into the cake stand and causing the cakes to explode.

"Don't you dare touch Wallflower or Twilight! I will kill you if you try to hurt them!" growled Dash, her magic power flaring a bit as Mars was in awe and put a new blank canvas on the stand and started painting her.

"I'm impressed. You're not a pushover," replied Venus, leaping out of the mess and starting to kick Dash with a ballet-style attack while the ribbons were trying to cut Dash up simultaneously.

"You're not bad yourself, but not strong enough to take on a speedster like me!" replied Dash, blocking the kicks and quickly spinning around and kicking Venus across the face, sending her to a table.

Venus didn't stop as the ribbons wrapped around the table and tossed it at her.

"HOW ABOUT THIS!?" shouted Venus.

"HA!" Dash jumped high into the air, landed on the table, and did a cartwheel, flipping backward and landing near Venus, quickly kneeing her in the stomach, making Venus cough out. "HOW WAS THAT!? GOT ANY MORE!?"

Venus's eyes glowed. "I do."

Pinkie popped out of the food mess and tried to use her powers, but she was pulled by her hair and tossed to the wall. Dash heard the noise and turned to dodge a quick rainbow punch. She dashed away and was shocked to see herself.

"What the!?"

It was Dash, but anime-looking and doing warm-ups.


"Yo. My name is Rainbow Dash! The fastest runner in Equestria High School!" smirked the Dash counterpart.

Mars skipped towards the new Dash and proudly showed herself.

"And my name is Mars, the most talented artist in the galaxy! I love the color of your hair and those eyes; I can draw many things from them. You're so cool. So, I drew and summoned a version of you from another universe! Say hello to Rainbow Dash from the Kotobukiya universe!"

Dash didn't know what to say, but she knew this was bad. "Uh-oh."

Kotobukiya Dash gave a thumbs up. "Nice to meet me."

Dash waved at her. "Nice to meet me too?"

Kotobukiya Dash's eyes glowed like rainbows. "NOW! BETTER START RUNNING!" and sped her way towards Dash, leaving Dash little time to dodge. As the speed was so fast, the wind pushed her away, almost falling.

"OH MAN! SHE'S FAST! How is she so fast?"

"YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE WITH SUPER SPEED! BESIDES, I'M MUCH STRONGER THEN YOU!" shouted Kotobukiya Dash, speeding at Dash again, ready to punch her.

Dash quickly recovered and ran away, with Kotobukiya Dash chasing after her, running all around the room, and even jumping off the walls.

Mars was happy and clapping her hands. "GO KOTOBUKIYA DASH! GET HER!"

Kotobukiya Dash smiles. "YOU'RE NOT GOING TO RUN FOREVER!" She sped up and was getting close, ready to tackle her.

"NOPE! I'M NOT! I'M NOT GOING TO LOSE YOU! EVEN IF YOU ARE ME FROM ANOTHER UNIVERSE!" shouted Dash; her magic was flaring, and she quickly stopped and jumped.

"WHAT!? How!?" asked Kotobukiya Dash, shocked that Dash could jump so high, as Kotobukiya Dash couldn't jump that high and slammed into the ground.

Dash was upside down and in a relaxed pose. "I may not be able to run like you, but I can still jump!" she smirked.
Kotobukiya Dash was about to say something until a bunch of candy landed on her, popping like fireworks. Dash landed, and hopping to her side was Pinkie.

"Are you okay, Pinkie? Did she hurt you?" asked Dash.

Pinkie smiled while putting a cake inside her hair. "Nope. I'm fine! So, Dash, what's going on here!? Was this the evil equestrian magic you were talking about!?" She looked at the three enemies but waved at Kotobukiya Dash, who rolled her eyes and waved back.

"No. These girls...are something else, way stronger than equestrian magic."

"Alrighty then!" Pinkie looked at the three and smiled. "I think we should start the party!"

"Party!?" said Venus, while Mars clapped with joy. While the two Dash's just sighed.

"YES PARTY!" shouted Pinkie, taking out a ton of candy and throwing it at them, blasting them in a vast pink explosion.

When the smoke cleared, the three were protected by weird drawing creatures.

"Art is beautiful," said Mars, smiling at her creations as they held shields and weapons.

Pinkie looked confused. "How is art a weapon? Wait, is that a busty purple dragon!?"

The purple dragon slammed its tail down near the two.

"Good morning, motherfuckers!" it yelled as it knocked Dash and Pinkie to the wall, cracking it.

Mars smiled and petted the dragon but quickly took out her paintbrush, and her eyes flashed different paint colors. She smacked Pinkie away from her, who appeared out of thin air, making her land on a table.

"What the hay!? How did you know where I was going to be!?" asked Pinkie as she sat on the table and rubbed her chin.

Mars's eyes turned back to normal. "I see the universe in a different light than everyone else does. I saw a lot of different colored paint that showed me your next move."

"Woah! That sounds cool!" said Pinkie, her eyes all bright.

"Yeah, it is," replied Mars, smiling.

"MARS! STOP CHATING WITH PINKIE AND GET READY TO BEAT THEM!" shouted Venus, as she and Kotobukiya Dash were holding back Dash, who was trying to attack them with her speed.

Mars sighed. "Yes, Venus. I'll try my best." her eyes started glowing a bright yellow and green paint-like. "But I need a moment." She raised her brush and paint and smacked it down, causing the floor to be covered in weird drawings, making Pinkie and Dash fall within it.


"What!?" yelled Pinkie.

"What is this place?" asked Dash.

They were looking all around; it was a strange world of colors and paint everywhere, but the ground was all red.

"Woah! This is amazing! Is this where you live!?"

"Yup. This is the world of Mars. MY MARS!" answered Mars, who was floating behind them.

Pinkie looked at the ground and licked it. Making Dash cringe. "It tastes like red paint."

Mars just smiled. "That's because it's the color of my world. Red. The color of passion, just like I have passion for...." she raised her arms up. "ART!" She summoned her paintbrush and slammed it into the ground, and different versions of Dash and Pinkie were summoned.

Dash could see different versions of her, like other animals, different color-skinned humans, and a cross between the two. There was even a blue cat with rainbow colors, blushing hard for some odd reason.

"Great, another version of me..."

On the other hand, Pinkie waved at her versions, who waved back.

"HI GIRLS! STILL COMING TO THE NEXT PINKIE COMPANY MEETING NEXT WEEK!?"

All the Pinkies shouted "YES!" in unison.

Mars landed next to Pinkie and asked what company she was talking about. As she, Pinkie, and other Pinkies chatted, Dash, on the other hand, was fighting for her life as she had to dodge other versions of herself, who were just as fast as her.

"THIS IS RIDICULOUS! Why are you doing this?" asked Dash, jumping onto the legs of a giant robot version of her and using it as a boost, jumping off and landing on a jar with a pony version of her inside with white goo.

"Because of art!" answered Mars, as she was painting on a canvas while the other Pinkies were drawing like it was a class or something.

Dash rolled her eyes. "Of course it was." She quickly jumped off the jar, kicking it away, knocking her versions into a rock, and freeing the trapped Dash from her jar prison.

"I'M FREE!" cheered Jar Dash as she was covered in white goo.

Dash landed and ran off, but a male version of her and a poorly drawn pony appeared beside her and tried to kick and punch her. Dash quickly kicked and punched back, knocking the boy and the pony into each other and crashing.

"Why do you have to kill Wallflower!? She's just trying to go home and save her friend!" Dash kicked away a naked version of herself with pony ears and a tail. "Tell me why!"

Mars stopped her art class, turned to Dash, and answered her. "It's our job. Mother Earth loves this world she helped create, and we'll do anything to ensure you girls are safe!" She turned to Deadpool Pinkie and clapped as she saw the drawing of Deadpool Pinkie riding Rainbow Dash with both holding guns. "Plus, if we don't stop the anomaly, the rules will start taking effect."

"Rules?" said all the Pinkies.

Dash kicks away a fursuit version of her pony self, revealing herself inside. She turned toward Mars. "What rules?"

"Oh, right." Mars stopped her class, and her eyes glowing again showed the image of the universe while a voice spoke.

"When an anomaly tries to change the story, the universe will send out guardians, and if the guardians fail to stop it, The universe will start to break down and die. It's even worse if it happens in a prime universe. If the prime universe dies, then the prime universe tree will die, killing all the MLP multiverses."

"WHAT!?" shouted all Dash and Pinkies, shocking Mars a bit.

"Yep. That's the rule, and the story of a universe can't be changed, and I won't let that happen. It's not the first time an anomaly has appeared, but for some reason, Mother Earth allowed it and rewritten it into 'canon.'" Mars continued her drawing class.

Dash held the blushing cat version of herself and ran away from the paper cut out of herself. "Not the first time? Fate!?" Dash stopped, tossed the cat into the paper cutout, and stood before Mars. "What a load of crap! Fate doesn't control us! We're not puppets! And we'll never be! I don't care if you have weird powers; you won't kill Wallflower!"

Mars's eyes turned different paint colors, and she could see 'it' within Dash, who suddenly had a puffy rainbow ghost jacket on. "She's going back home, and you won't stop her!" Dash's fist became rainbow colors and destroyed Mars's work, shocking her and her class.

"MY ART!!!! MY PERFECT PIECE OF ART!!!"

Pinkie was amazed and cheering. "WOWIE ZOWIE! DASH, THAT WAS AMAZING! Also, cool ghost jacket."

Dash was also amazed and confused about the jacket. "Huh. It looks like a Wallflower jacket, huh?" Dash quickly noticed the world around them, started to drain into Mars, which was floating in the air, and summoned two paintbrushes.

"So, the first anomaly that Mother Earth allowed showed itself! I'll paint over you-!" Mars quickly sensed all the Pinkies around her and smacked their paint canvas on her, trapping her in the canvas holes and falling to the ground. "W-What!? How!? I should have sensed all of you breaking the fourth wall! Also, how did you break free from my controls!?"

Deadpool Pinkie trotted up to her, and taking out Deadpool killed the Marvel Universe comic. "We Pinkies are unpredictable, like how Deadpool here, a cute hunk, by the way, was able to kill Spiderman, who has spider sense and can dodge anything."
Mars was confused and shocked as the world returned to normal. Putting them back in the all-you-can-eat buffet room, everyone could see Kotobukiya Dash fighting Venus, who was free from Mars's control.

"Mars!?" shouted Venus, seeing her tossed to the ground with all the Pinkies and Dashes surrounding her. "Tsk, this isn't good!"

Venus quickly summoned her ribbons, wrapping around all the tables and tossing them at them, only to have the table explode and knock Venus into the wall.

"Forth!" shouted Deadpool Pinkie, holding her cupcake launcher.

Dash walked up to Venus and grabbed her dress. "So? Are you going to stop all this or what!?"

"Or what?" answered Venus, her ribbon wrapping around Dash, lifting her and tossing her to the other Pinkies and Dashes. "Mars may be weak, but not me. I have brawn to back this pretty face!"

Dash groaned. "Yea, yea. We'll see about that," as her versions helped her up.

Venus rolled her eyes. "Sure. I'm so scared." Her eyes glowed pink, ribbons surrounded her legs, and the ground under her became a large crater. "Tell me, do you know what gravity on Venus is like? It's about 91% of Earth's gravity. But thanks to Mother Earth, she increased my gravity and is now 1000 times the normal gravity."

"W-What?" asked Dash.

Kotobukiya Dash sped toward Venus. "And all that is in my legs. Like this." Venus quickly kicked Kotobukiya Dash in the chest, scattering her into a rainbow paint splash.

"HOLY SHIT!" shouted all Dashes and Pinkies.

Mars rolled her way toward Venus and smiled. "Don't worry. She's not dead; she just returned home." making all Dashes and Pinkies sigh with relief.

Venus walked over Mars's trapped body and slowly approached the groups.

"Not you two," she pointed to the Prime Pinkie and Dash. "I'll kill you where you stand, and you won't come back!"

Mars nodded but quickly stopped and rolled her way towards her. "Wait, WHAT!? We can't kill them! They're the human prime versions!"

"I know," said Venus. "They're the main character," she smiled. "But some main characters do die in a story." She kicked Mars away, sending her through the ceiling and flying to space, but was caught by someone. "Now, give me the anomaly! I won't ask again!"

Dashes and the other Pinkies were charging towards Venus, but Deadpool Pinkie stopped Prime EQG Dash and Pinkie.

"Whoa, you two! Get the heck out of here and...hold on," they watched as Deadpool Pinkie took a laptop out and checked the FiM website. She checked the future chapters of this fic, but she also bookmarked a few fics. "Oh, nice clop fics today!" she giggled. "Okay! Yeah, your friends are in danger. You need to get to them." She opened the door and waved them to leave. "Now, you two can go!"

Dash and Pinkie could see their counterparts holding Venus off, but many were getting scattered.

"Dash, we better go! Let them hold her off! I'm sure they'll be fine."

"Pinkie." Dash could see that Cat Dash was getting kicked away into a wall. "We can't leave them here! Not when they're fighting for us!" She could see the other versions getting knocked away, only for them to get back up and continue the fight.

Pinkie nodded. "Yeah, but we're the prime versions, remember. If we die, the multiverse is screwed!.... I think?"

Dash looked away from her other self and sighed. "I know. It's just. I feel like we're abandoning them."

Kotobukiya Pinkie crashed behind them and popped up, smiling.

"Dash, this is for the good of the multiverse. GO!" She did a battle yell and leap towards Venus.

"Pinkie!?" shouted Dash. "Damnit!" she turned to her Pinkie. "Let's go, Pinkie!"

"Right!" Pinkie jumped on Dash's back, and Dash took off with her trademark speed but returned, saving the chef and bringing her safely.

Venus scattered a group of Pinkies and Dashs and looked at the exit. "COME BACK HERE! CO-HEY!" Her face was covered by the blushing cat Dash, making biscuits and meowing loudly. "ENOUGH!" Venus released her gravity into the room, scattering all the Pinkies and Dashes and crushing the entire room.

She dropped to her knees and was worn out from releasing all that gravity. "Damn. All that power is still hard to use."

"You did great, Venus," said a female on the wind as a gust came in and stopped in front of her. "Rest, I'll chase them down!"

Venus looked up and smiled. "Fine, it's up to you, Mercury. Just remember who you are up against."


"Ha! I'm faster!" smirked Mercury, as she was already gone; only her afterimage was standing there.

Venus sat down to rest but quickly sensed someone coming through the hole in the ceiling. It was Mars. She didn't say anything when she landed and pointed up, making Venus look up and gulp as she saw her leader floating near the hole, her star eyes glowing with anger.

"Oh no..."

"VENUS!" shouted her leader as the whole universe shook.


Meanwhile, Rarity and Ragamuffin were talking on the stage.

"My pa worked in a coal mine, but I always wanted to dance!" He looked at Rarity and rubbed the back of his head. "Eh, a fancy girl like you wouldn't understand."

"Well, actually, in the school production of Bedazzled, I played a coal miner's daughter who danced in bedazzled magical boots from her fairy bootmother. So..." Rarity did a nervous laugh while Ragamuffin did a small smile. Rarity slowly looked at him, and both started to lean forward. They were about to kiss but stopped as Twilight rushed in, Wallflower still in her arms.

"RARITY!" shouted Twilight.

"Oh, Twilight, dear. What happened?" asked Rarity as she got off the stage, rushing over to her and seeing the girl in her arms.

Before Twilight could answer her, they heard booing, looked around for the source, and realized it was coming above them.
Rarity couldn't believe what she was seeing. They could see a pale girl dressed in a sleeve white dress sitting in a chair.

"Boo! The romance was getting good! Keep going!"

Ragamuffin looked at Rarity. "You know this weirdo?"

Rarity shook her head. "No," she said, turning to the girl. "Excuse me, but who are you!?"

The pale girl giggled. "My name is The Moon." She jumped off the chair and landed between Rarity and Twilight. "And I'm here for..." she quickly turned to Twilight, who held Wallflower tight. "HER!" she said, raising her hand, and Twilight suddenly floated into the air.

"The gravity!" shouted Ragamuffin as he floated too.

Rarity screamed as she floated off the floor and held down her dress as it lifted a bit, almost revealing her panties.

"I can manipulate it," Moon answered as her body glowed white and her gray hair floated.


Meanwhile, Fluttershy sighed as she walked down the hall, still upset that the petting zoo had become routine because of Dash and her crazy talk about evil magic. She returned to the petting zoo section and noticed all the animals hanging out with two girls. One just sighed


and toning her bass guitar while the other one

was feeding all the animals...and four animals had space helmets on as they were floating around her.

"Huh?" she walked up to them. "What's going on here?"

Both girls turned to Fluttershy.

"Oh, hi, Fluttershy!" said the hippy-looking girl.

The other girl just looked at her and returned to toning her bass.

Fluttershy gasped, surprised that the girl knew her name. "How do you know my name? We haven't met before, right?"

"Oh, we know who you are. Mother Earth showed us your stories! You love animals..." The girl stood up, and the other girl joined her, glowing with energy. "Like me!"

End of Chapter 25

Author's Note:

fun fact, no vectors of the art of the anime figures can be found lol had to use my mine.

second fun fact: the cat is from Pawsitively Purrfect Bet! i swear I'm writing the next chapter. just been busy with this fic

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