Dear Twilight Sparkle,
I greatly enjoyed our outing together. I do hope that you feel the same. If I overstepped my bounds, I apologize; if I understepped my bounds, you'll need to let me know, because I've never been very good at finding them either way. In any case, if you're interested in meeting again, do let me know. While my work in Canterlot keeps me remarkably busy at all hours, I might be able to slip away for a day at some point.
Yrs. sincerely,
Liminal StateP.S. I am aware that I may have made a less-than-positive impression with some of your friends. Please let them know that I hold no personal ill will towards them. As you may have already noted, I am not by nature the most genuinely social pony. That's why I was so unpleasant when the talk of my cutie mark came up. There is a story behind it, and I won't tell you the full details, but: I discovered once that my talent was to show a different face to others. For a time I made full use of that to do things I came to regret, and then I spent a long time rejecting it. It's only recently that I've started to get more in touch with that part of myself and, I hope, to use it for something like good.
P.P.S. Lack of personal ill will does not preclude dislike of apple-derived foods.
In other words, f*** you, Applejack.
This is surprisingly sincere, if it is in fact sincere.
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I would say probably a little lying, a lot of truth...but greatly enhanced and/or exagerated. After all, one can be deceptive, while still being sincere. There's a lot of empty space that Twilight's mind would fill in, without Chrysalis having to lie. An if Twilight were to confront her, she could just LITERALLY say, "Well I never actually said that. That was something you created in your head."
nice work.
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It's a bit weird that Chrysalis would mention having spent a while not being two-faced, though. I wonder what's up with that.
Fantastic fic so far.
I'm really looking forward to this union actually working out, despite Chryssi's obvious attempts to annoy Celestia.
Might I suggest a non-letter chapter where we see Chrysalis working (undisguised) with Luna and/or Cadence or Shining to actually hammer out how this thing is going to work? And to exchange suggestions for how to best rile up Celestia, of course.
Kind of hoping she eventually starts messing with Luna.
Hmm, interesting. For a while there I thought it would be more of a Celestia/Chrysalis fic, since Chryssie's antagonism and strange obsession with sending Celestia letters and hinting at constantly being near sunbutt could translate into the stress and tension eventually coming to a head and Celestia starts a knock-down, drag-out fight with Chrysalis that at some point evolves into passionate, yet incredibly violent sex. I'm talking Godzilla Threshold level of property/landscape destruction, both before and after the turn.
Ah, well. It shall be interesting to see where this goes.
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I would want to see that too
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Good point, I have updated it for that.
I wanna see the interaction between Liminal State and Twilight’s friends.
Huh... Guess Chrysalis is more of a banana or cherry lover? I wonder if love taste like Strawberrys...