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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 53 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 54 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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  • 55 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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  • 56 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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  • 56 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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May
9th
2023

What I Am: Aftermath chapter. · 2:15am May 9th, 2023

Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

I felt it was necessary, considering that that particular one doesn't seem to have nearly as robust a following as the original story, so I thought that many might have considered this story dead. It's a good way to let them know it's continuing, so I wanted you guys who still check up on me every so often to take a look. I'm working on the next chapter of A Darkened Sky too, and won't release my Aftermath chapter until that one is done.

However, I thought that Aftermath might need something a little extra, so I'm asking for some suggestions. If you have the time and the inclination, I'd love to hear from you!

What I Am: Aftermath

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Comments ( 4 )

Honestly, a "chapter" that's literally just "Announcement: the sequel is finally getting new chapters, go check it out" would be enough for the purpose of drawing attention to that. Anything more than that is a bonus.

5727302 The problem with that is that that's against the rules of this site, and has absolutely been something that the moderators have dinged me for. If there's going to be any announcement chapter, it has to have actual content for me to skirt past any overzealous mods.

I agree with the MODs being ridiculous. I think an aftermath chapter would be a great idea and add the sequel info on an author note would be the best way to go. The hole chapter could be use to help set up a pretext for the sequel and a little insight oh how the characters are thinking/feeling like a short preview of things that happen between the stories.

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