Wow i suck.

OK, so i have one story so far and i thought it was going well, keywords i thought. i decided 'hey why not take a look at that writing guide thing?' so i head over, and sure enough, i'm doing a whole buncha stuff wrong. now i'm not gonna go back and change it, but i will try and improve upon it, there are some things i don't care to change, but i will try and do most of them, to make the story better! so all you people that actually like my story, hang in there! i will try to make it good! i'm sure you could see that it was wrong, and were waiting for me to improve, but constructive criticism is nice! so the next chapter will be better, i hope it will be at least!