Change to CH2 · 3:10am Jun 7th, 2014
So before this week there was a bit in chapter two about Pinkie Pie. I had no idea what I wanted to do with her so I wrote a little bit, the gist of which was "Pinkie decides not to show up." This was pretty crap and one of the people who I asked to pre-read straight-up told me to get rid of it. I kept it though, because I wasn't sure what else to do. Pinkie SHOULD logically greet them because they're new in Ponyville, but I didn't want to because I had visions of how the easily-statled, paranoid Mir would handle having the Party Cannon pointed anywhere near her.
Then, while thinking about something else, how to handle Pinkie hit me. I can't reveal what's up just yet, but it has to do with how I decided Pinkie Sense works. In any case, chapter two was edited to remove the old bit (which works even less well with the new plan) and replace it with a new one.
Also, I apologize for the wait for chapter 3, I should have that up tomorrow.
